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great chapter, i love youre style of writing and cannot wait for more dealing with this group of characters x
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, elfenears!
I am always up for anything having to with Arwen and Aragorn. Thank you for this story and please, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Scribetothehighking! I’m glad to know that you’re enjoying the story.
this is very beautifully written. you describe gilraen and her feelings very well. her love for elrond is interesting and understandable. cannot wait for the next chapter, thanks for writing and keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your reviews, elfenears! I appreciate it so much to know that you are enjoying my writing.
this first chapter was great, wonderful writing and detail. now i'm off to read the second
So glad you've finnally started writing this. Very good, look forward to reading more
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. Hopefully, I will actually get chapter two completed sometime soon!
This is most beautifully written. I have to say Arwen does not interest me and I have read canon females portrayed much better by fanfiction writers than by Tolkien himself - think of all the un-named broodmares ( to quote a friend ) in the histories. I think you write her better than Tolkien actually although Elladan and Elrohir and Estel are why I read it. d;-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Fanarix, even though Arwen doesn’t interest you so much. I’ll tell you that Arwen won’t actually be in this story much more (other than, perhaps, a brief appearance in the final chapter). While Gilraen, Elrond and Elrohir will all be featured in future chapters, and there will be various other themes running through this story, Elladan’s relationship with Aragorn is the main focus. Now, I just have to try to work through my current spell of writer’s block which has been hindering me for months so I can get chapter two completed!