It's a little confusing and I think you should write more so that we will be able to understand better what is going on.
The writing is well done.
Reviews For Flower in the Sand
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed
Interesting . . .
Date: 07/04/08 08:15 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Youch, poor Erestor! Please update soon!
Date: 06/05/08 02:38 am [Report This]