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Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 - 11:39 am Title: The First Adventure

You should do more because where you left off, it's a little confusing. *shrugs* not like my stories are any better.

Reviewer: Andolynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/08 - 01:01 am Title: The First Adventure

HOMG!!! this is SO good. no wonder tu madre wants you to publish something!

few grammatical errors, nothing a little revision won't catch.

ESCRIBE MAS, CHICA!

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