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Title: The First Adventure Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed
You should do more because where you left off, it's a little confusing. *shrugs* not like my stories are any better.
Date: Oct 15 2008 07:39 am [Report This]
Title: The First Adventure Reviewer: Andolynn Signed
HOMG!!! this is SO good. no wonder tu madre wants you to publish something!

few grammatical errors, nothing a little revision won't catch.

ESCRIBE MAS, CHICA!
Date: May 08 2008 09:01 pm [Report This]
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