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Reviewer: Sivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/06/08 - 09:57 am Title: Promises are made to be broken

Nice twist in the end. Poor Elrohir to thought that, and Elladan answer was quite a mean to him... love the angst you done with this two, and i'm glad that Elrond was there.

Thank you for wrriting it! :-)

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: thanks thanks thanks for your review! You made my day ^^

Reviewer: Lira_of_Imladris Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/06/08 - 10:57 pm Title: Promises are made to be broken

This was awesome!! I can't believe it, you finally wrote your own story!! I'm so happy for you!! Anyways, I think the only thing you need to work on is defining your paragraphs, the rest was pretty good. Hope to hear more from ya soon - Li

Author's Response: Paragraphs... hmmm yeah, I will work on that. I was too busy with trying to write no mistakes that I totally forgot about that. Anyways, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Aravissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/06/08 - 09:23 pm Title: Promises are made to be broken

Nice ending :) I enjoyed reading this.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your review, for it's my first time I write a fic.

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