Nice twist in the end. Poor Elrohir to thought that, and Elladan answer was quite a mean to him... love the angst you done with this two, and i'm glad that Elrond was there.
Thank you for wrriting it! :-)
*Hugs and Kisses*
Have a great week and keep smiling,
Author's Response: thanks thanks thanks for your review! You made my day ^^
This was awesome!! I can't believe it, you finally wrote your own story!! I'm so happy for you!! Anyways, I think the only thing you need to work on is defining your paragraphs, the rest was pretty good. Hope to hear more from ya soon - Li
Author's Response: Paragraphs... hmmm yeah, I will work on that. I was too busy with trying to write no mistakes that I totally forgot about that. Anyways, thanks for your review!