This is very cute story. I like most the chapter 2. Legolas and Thranduil are very well pictured, Tolkien wrote, that elven children were learning very quickly and needed very little guidance and elven parents loved and treasured their children dearly, which you pictured perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! I'm glad you noticed! I love the elves, so It means alot to me to get thier characteristics right. ;) So again, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <333