Well I would say that this story is pretty good so far. I will keep reading and review. But I tend to read right through cause once the story gets a hold of me I can't stop until there is no more to read. Very good. Love it. I know how you feel about not getting reviews. I have the same problem. Don't let it get you down though.
Author's Response: ^.^ yay!! a review!!! thank valor!!! heh, i wrote this a long time ago, you might want to try out my other story, the eragon one. thanks for the encouragement, the last reviews i got were burning knives in the side. I WILL NOT LET IT GET ME DOWN!! *shakes fist* sorry, my school work has caused me to go insane. please keep reviewing, i just checked this, and was blown away-i have a REVIEW?!?-you just made my day!! thank you thank you thank you!!!
Now, you are the proud mother of a Mini-Balrog named Sauroman. It's "Saruman", dear.
Author's Response: -.- ive goten most things they say from a site with teh origanal, extened edition, script. i dont care. why do you call me dear? i am dreadfuly confused at you...
Oh, lovely. Now she's half plant. Symbiotic plants don't exist in Middle-earth. Bah.
Author's Response: shut up, and get off my back, you STRANGE PERSON WHO HATES A GIRL THAT JUST WANTS TO GET A FEW THINGS OF GOOD FEED BACK, AND IS TRULY WRITING AT A 12TH GRADE LEVAL IN OTHER FANTASY PAPERS AND HISTORY ON THE GREAT FIRE OF ROME, SO BEET THAT! Ishkhaqwi ai durugnul!!!! Amin delotha lle!!! Auta miqula orqu!!! Llie n'vanima ar' lle atara lanneina!!!! take that, you commen speeker. dosent know howmany insults that i just put in elvish. STAY OFF MY BACK, AND LET ME BE WHO I WANT TO BE, IF I GET ANOTHER REVIEW FROM YOU... d*** i can do anything to you, im writing to a cyberperson, who pissed can i get...
Arya Forest Maiden, you are charged with disrupting the Canon by mucking with the characters of Gandalf and Aragorn, who was in his eighties during the War of the Ring, darlin'...; using bad spelling and grammar (SPELL CHECK!); owning one of the Three despite the fact that Vilya, Nenya and Narya are all accounted for; and being a Mary Sue- and this is all in the first chapter! I won't read you your rights, because you don't get any. You are sentenced to death by Warg. Have a nice day.
Author's Response: i realy, realy, realy, realy, realy hate you people who hate my writing becuase that I AM JUST 11 YEARS OLD FOR THE GODS SAKES, SO STAY OFF MY BACK FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO SPELL RIGHT, YES, I KNOW HE WAS IN HIS EIGHTIES BECUASE I HAVE A LOT OF LORD OF THE RINGS HISTORY BOOKS THAT I READ, AND I KNEW FOR A LONG TIME! I HAVE KNOW, I SAY A SHORT WHILE, THATS WHAT THE ELVES MESURE IT BY, BECUASE I AM ELVIN! I DONT CARE ABOUT YOUR HUMAN YEARS! AND GUESS WHAT?!?!? THEY NEVER FOUND THE RED RING OF THE ELVES, ONLY ELROND AND GALADRIAL NEW WHERE IT WAS!!!! SO STAY OFF MY HOMEWORK LOADED BACK, PERSON! IF YOU DONT LIKE IT, DONT READ IT!!!! very angerly, and about ot cuse you out if i dont end this soon, will not have a nice day, arya forest maiden. (suddenly flicks off computer)
You know, we ought to have a description next to each warning to say what it means! "AU" means Alternate Universe, for instance, one in which one of the elven rings confers the power of shapeshifting and another gives the power of flight, or whatever, or one in which Legolas is really a girl, or Arwen left for Valinor with her mother so she and Aragorn never met. "Slash" means same sex romance, or sex, as in "Gandalf-slash-Gollum" (please don't write that one: it would be too scary!).
Round Robin, that I see you have also chosen, makes the story open to other writers so that they can add chapters. I'm not sure if that's what you intended . . .
Author's Response: what they need, is YOU! thanks soooo much for that! an Arya is Leggy's sis, and i need to put round robbin off, adnd........... heck, you just told me a bunch of stuff! thanks! -Arya Forest Maiden
Welcome to LotRfanfiction. I see that you've put a lot of warnings on your story (and from the opening chapter, it doesn't look like it will merit the slash or off topic ones), but it looks as if you've left off the AU. Since the warnings you choose will often draw or discourage readers, I suggest you read over the selection of warnings carefully and choose the most appropriate. Good luck with your story.
Author's Response: thanks! i'm not very eduacted with the AU (dont have a clue of what that meens) or what the slash meens. thanks for the warnings, and thanks for the welcome! -Arya Forest Maiden