1: was Gandalf's shout supposed to be "crebain"? Because it only shows an exclamation mark.
2: You changed pronouns in the middle...from "he" to "she". Was that purposeful?
3: On to chapter 3!!!
I don't want to die either. Geez, what's your problem??!! *Laughs* Sorry! This is really interesting, honestly. I don't know what else to say. Good job?
Author's Response: Thanks. n Are you ok with me mentioning your name in the end notes next chapter?
Yep, Annabeth's not human alright. But things are moving a teensy bit too fast. I like the way you write, and the style draws me in. Again, I felt sorry for Annabeth when she was puking. Must be horrible not to be able to digest food. Great chapter. Keep up the good work! : )
Author's Response: its supposed to be a couple days later but i forgot to right that in. love the input.
Maybe you shouldn't have made her react like that. Maybe she should be like okay . . . I do not know where I am and who are these people. Not like . . . omg they're gonna kill me!
Just a thought.
Author's Response: Yeah, but i tried to look at it from a normal persons POV. I mean, if i had woken up like she had, i would have been worse. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAy worse. By the way, what did you think of her dream?
Hmm . . . interesting. I'm always up for some vampires, sounds a lot liek the Cullens from Twilight this one does but do they have a name? I think I shall continue to read this - Li
Author's Response: Yeah, her names Annabeth. She was once a druid.