It's a good poem overall, and the only critisism I have is that "...skeptical mind... it melts" The 'it' I think should start with a capital I. Otherwise I like this poem as it rhymes, it's a good topic and it's just... Brill!
Author's Response: So it does... Thanks! I didn't realise. I'm very glad you liked it, thanks!
You think I'm an excellent writer? Thank you! I don't really think of myself that way so it really comes as a shock that someone would say that. My ego just went through the roof! Thank you.
Author's Response: Yeah, you are, you're welcome, hoping to see more stories from you!
This is great! Man, you make me so jealous that you've put into words something I have imagined for so long! I love this!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! it's what i imagine too, you are an excellent writer so it's great to get feed back from you thanks!
The imagery in this is great, I can imagine everything so clearly.
I would LOVE to visit a place like this.
Loved it, awesome work. =]
Author's Response: Thank you! This means a lot to me; to read comments like this is very motivating. thanks for reading!
I thought this poem was very moving and something a lot of us here can understand. Wouldn't we all love to escape to another world?
I also love the imagery of the once royal halls, though I'm not entirely sure what you mean by that.
(Sorry about this, but it's received, not recieved.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sil, and also thanks for the spelling correction! i'll remember to correct it.