Okay I would have to say. WoW and very interesting. I always wondered if any one would ever bring in Gymnastics or Tae Kwondo or something. I like this. Waiting for next chapter.
I think that you could have made it a little more interesting. I think you should have added a little more emotion to Vana, Legolas, and Arya and a few more reactions to other things. But I really like it!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! The end of that chapter came to soon! Must load up on more chappies. Need chappie food. Yes the plot does thicken like turkey gravy. (don't mind me still have turkey on the brain) This is a good can't put down this story to breath even. Will try to wait patiently for the next chapter!
Hmm…let me guess Lego’s opinion on the whole thing...He wants it ditch it all and run away to…me! Muhahahaha!
*Looks at blood on hands * Erm, I think Vanafindiel is dead. Oops, Goheno nin.
*Points to Edward Cullen * Uh…he did it!!
Last thing: What did you call me in Elvish?!!
Author's Response: Faer nîn veren; narn hen ann ~ My spirit is joyous; this tale will be long not an insult melon nin
Oh, I got it. Trying to go Edward/Bella on the whole walking into wall, hallway fight thing? Interesting. Yup, I'm definatly killing Vanafindiel. You better write all the parts with her in them soon, before I kill her for taking my Lego!!
Author's Response: As far as I know we havent seen the last of Vanafindiel. Mwahahaha but we will find out how Legs feels about the whole thing within the next few chappies. I will most likely have an update soon so keep reading. Faer nîn veren; narn hen ann! PS. Legs is mine lol
Good story. It seems Legolas is being very patient with Arya as she goes through her inner turmoils. I hope things get better between the two of them. I hope this story continues. I hope it does not take so long for the next chapter! LOL,lol!! Sorry. Can't wait though. Look forward to the next chpt. Maria
EEEH! You update, YES! and I am also from Seattle, so this story sorta hits closer to home. :D!
I caught something at the very end of your chapter and it is this:
“Would you like to be escorted back to your room, my lady? Actually make some of that lie you told Elladan and Elrohir true? I stuck my tongue out at him but nodded. He held out his arm and together we walked towards the Last Homely House.
where is the other quotation mark? Just wondering and friendly pointer. :) :D.
PPPPLLLLEEEAAASSSSEEE update soon. ;).
Author's Response: uhh idk why thats there or where the other one is . lol. i think I wanted to make that 2 seperate staments and then decided against it and forgot about it. lol. thanks for pointing it out tho. I'll try to update again soon if school work doesnt kill me first
Hey, I was wondering will there be a sequel to this story like your other two? I would love to read that, if you go that way of course.
Author's Response: Most likely there will be a sequel. thanks for wondering. trying to get another chappie for this one up asap. stupid writers block. ><