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Title: Wandering Child Reviewer: Midnight Light Sonata Signed
i like it
great job
Date: Oct 28 2008 08:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Wandering Child Reviewer: Elbe Signed
EEEH! You update, YES! and I am also from Seattle, so this story sorta hits closer to home. :D!

I caught something at the very end of your chapter and it is this:
“Would you like to be escorted back to your room, my lady? Actually make some of that lie you told Elladan and Elrohir true? I stuck my tongue out at him but nodded. He held out his arm and together we walked towards the Last Homely House.

where is the other quotation mark? Just wondering and friendly pointer. :) :D.

PPPPLLLLEEEAAASSSSEEE update soon. ;).

Author's Response: uhh idk why thats there or where the other one is . lol. i think I wanted to make that 2 seperate staments and then decided against it and forgot about it. lol. thanks for pointing it out tho. I'll try to update again soon if school work doesnt kill me first
Date: Oct 26 2008 05:04 pm [Report This]
Title: The Oak Grove and the Hall of Fire Reviewer: Elbe Signed
Hey, I was wondering will there be a sequel to this story like your other two? I would love to read that, if you go that way of course.

Elbe.

Author's Response: Most likely there will be a sequel. thanks for wondering. trying to get another chappie for this one up asap. stupid writers block. ><
Date: Oct 19 2008 06:53 pm [Report This]
Title: You're a What?! Reviewer: Elbe Signed
Please update this story, I have read all of the chapters so far and I love it. Please do update soon.

Elbe.
Date: Oct 19 2008 12:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Dinner, Dancing and Forest Circles? Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
So far I like it. :)
Is her mystery partner, Legolas??

Author's Response: Maybe... ;D
Date: Sep 22 2008 01:40 pm [Report This]
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