Oh boy when Jessica gets mad! This was very entertaining and I can't wait to see what happens next. Yeah I'm just getting over a cold myself. But don't worry, just do the best you can. will wait patiently for the next chp. At least I hope to. LOL!
Author's Response: I am so glad that there are people who are enjoying my writing, and yes Jessica is a strong minded person. I made her that way because I was fed up of reading stories where an extra OC was placed in and they are the wussiest things in Arda. There will be more background into Jessica and her family in the upcoming chapters, which might explain why Jessica is the way she is. I hope to have the next few chapters up soon and with this following the majority of the Book with a few scenes from the film to tie it together better it will take a while to complete, especially since I do better with writing the chapters from the characters POV. Keep reading and enjoy.
Yeah it would be nice to see her hook up with someone. But what if that is not her destiny her road she is to walk on. I don't know only the author does. (wink!) I just started reading the story and just could not stop today. I just finished chapter 10 and now can't wait for the rest. Pretty good start. I like this story very much. And the idea that she can pretty much take care of herself like hunting etc. A Wiccan? That is interesting and I want to read more of this clearly wonderful lady. About the hook-up? Who knows with whom. Haldir, Legolas, Orophin or Rumil. Or maybe a OC elf of Lorien? Maybe even Boromir. That clearly is up to you.
Author's Response: Thankyou many times over for the glowing review!! I like your ideas, and it seems like a high probability that she may hook up with either Boromir - he does have his good side yet to show to Jessica - or maybe even one of the Lorien Elves - It would be fun to see her with either Haldir or his brothers. I am not sure if i want to go with the Legolas arc since it seems to have been done to death - 100's of them in fact - so I may stear clear of that one and just keep them as really good friends. But thankyou for your ideas and i hope to post a new chapter or two in the next few months if my Muse can quite acting silly about my other fic. Enjoy!!
As for me I am enjoying this refreshing story, book or no. After all is this not fan-ficiton? Everyone writes in her or his way. The way they want to view the characters like 'Tolkein' did. I think very much you are doing a great job. I know you said to review but I tend to get stuck on a good story and cannot for the life of me stop or let it go. I find myself very far or to the end before I realize I did not review. I will try to though but like I said A good story is hard to put down let alone breath. But please don't stop writing keep going. Maria.l
Author's Response: Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!! It is really great when I get really positive reviews, and I am so glad that you are enjoying this story, right now I am only 8 Chapters in and they are just about to reach Lothlorien in Chapter 9 maybe Chapter 10 at the least and I am not even out of the first book yet! (Grin) I hope that you stick with me and tell me what you think when you can, I should have the next Chapter up by the end of this week - I hope!! Crystal
I like it :D Though 5 and 6 are just 4 split in two, you did realize you did that right? lol I never read the books, so i'm not familiar with it, but it's good to see another strong female being put in with the fellowship story :D