I enjoyed this story as it is appropriatly humorous. There are a few spelling mistakes but it is very well written and I hope you issue a challenge or respond to one soon, as it will be very good for more people to read and review your stories. Are you new to this site? If so please don't hesitate in asking other authors for hints or advice, as they will gladly give it to you. In the near future I think you should write another funny story as this one was very good. Well done!
No.... well yeah, I am kinda new. I'v had my account since the end of August or so and I havent been on much recently. I am not very good at getting around this site yet. What do you mean by challenge? I've heard of them, but could never seem to figure out what they were. I am really glad that you like my story, being as you are the first reviewer. I was kind of getting dissappointed that nobody was reviewing as this was one of the first stories I put on. If you or any other authors have any hints or advice for me I will be happy to have them as it would probably make my time navigating this site easier. And I will try to correct my spelling mistakes.... I'm not that great at spelling. As I found out that being 15 really has no effect on your spelling ability. At the moment I am trying to write another funny story, but I am having trouble comming up with some ideas so if you have any that you would be willing to give I would be more than happy to accept them!