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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ria Signed
I really like the rhythm of the last two lines. It's rather like the rhythm of Tolkien's "In Moria, in Khazad-dum".
Date: 02/15/09 12:10 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Aranel Erulisse Signed
Wow. I like a poem that sums up something big and important in just a few lines. Beautiful.
Date: 12/21/08 04:09 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Sniff.... I love your stories, but I love your poems more! Well done, keep writing! Meerkatalex.
Date: 10/12/08 07:41 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
I would imagine that Lothlorien would soon be reclaimed by nature once its residents, with the exception of a few diehard Elves, moved with Celeborn to found East Lorien. One can always hope that Caras Galadhon was maintained as a national park and place of pilgrimage after Arwen Evenstar was buried there.

Good poem!
Date: 10/03/08 07:44 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
oh, thats lovely! i really feel emotion with this poem... i especially like the last two lines. i would love it if you could extend it slightly. Great poem!
Date: 10/01/08 01:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Merry Signed
Wow! That is a beautiful poem. Well done!
Date: 10/01/08 01:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Wow! This poem is so meaningful and more than that, it actually rhymes!

Loved it, keep writing!
Date: 10/01/08 01:32 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Oh how sad! Very beatifully written though, It is just a very sad thought to think of such a beatiful place dead and whithered :(
Date: 09/30/08 04:48 pm [Report This]
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