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Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/02/09 - 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like the rhythm of the last two lines. It's rather like the rhythm of Tolkien's "In Moria, in Khazad-dum".

Reviewer: Aranel Erulisse Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/12/08 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I like a poem that sums up something big and important in just a few lines. Beautiful.

Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Sniff.... I love your stories, but I love your poems more! Well done, keep writing! Meerkatalex.

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1

I would imagine that Lothlorien would soon be reclaimed by nature once its residents, with the exception of a few diehard Elves, moved with Celeborn to found East Lorien. One can always hope that Caras Galadhon was maintained as a national park and place of pilgrimage after Arwen Evenstar was buried there.

Good poem!

Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/08 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh, thats lovely! i really feel emotion with this poem... i especially like the last two lines. i would love it if you could extend it slightly. Great poem!

Reviewer: Merry Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/08 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! That is a beautiful poem. Well done!

Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/08 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! This poem is so meaningful and more than that, it actually rhymes!

Loved it, keep writing!

Reviewer: Anwyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/09/08 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh how sad! Very beatifully written though, It is just a very sad thought to think of such a beatiful place dead and whithered :(

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