That was wonderful!!!! I love the mind-clasp idea and i totallly wish i could have one with a few of my friends. I am hoping the story will continue. I would be very interested what will happen when Boromir goes to Rivendell. Keep Writing!
-Lady of the Lake
I like it, have you been writing long? I think it is wonderful, I love the forshadowing. Can't wait for the next bit. I would appreciate some tips on forshadowing for you. Thank you and keep writing!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading and commenting; I really appreciate it! I suppose, in a way, I have been writing a long time, but truthfully, this is only my second multi-chaptered story. I've a few scattered oneshots here and there, but my first multi-chaptered fic took me over a year to write, although that was mostly because of laziness :-)
As to foreshadowing, thank you very much. It's easier to do foreshadowing if you know the general direction that your story is going, and the more you know, the better. Chapter 3 will have some major foreshadowing I think you will enjoy; if you like you can look it up on fanfiction.net, although I do intend to post it here as well. Thanks!