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Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/08 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

This has the feeling of Tolkien's Silmarillion, although his spelling was correct. It's so hard for me sometimes, so don't feel bad. I like the names you've chosen. I think I would be most like Adaptra becuase I love water and deep inside myself, I think it might be fun to be a goddess either of water or fire. I like fire, it's my element. I'll keep reading if you keep writing.

Reviewer: makingamocherieofyourstiles Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/08 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Now this I liked! Well done Andy! Great start and I can't wait to read more. Keep it up! :) Take care for now.

Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

So fire is evil? I rather like it and it's my element of choice. And I feel it should be noted, without fire, you do not have life. There is no warmth. Yes, it destroys but I wouldn't say it's evil. Anyone has the power to destroy but that does not make us necessarily evil.
*Shrugs* Just a thought. Hey, I'm a fanfiction writer, I think of these things. I am still interested and am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

I really want to know more. Who's Damilias? And who are the five dreads? This sounds like a ballad. It almost seems like your whispering the words of this story in a darkly lit tavern and I am definitely on the edge of my seat.
Am still reading . . .

Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay . . . you have curious chills running down my back. Will keep reading.

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