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Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/08 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 3

You've introduced some novel and interesting characters, and it's clear that you've planned a big story for a big world. At the same time, it could use some proofreading to help your ideas shine through.

Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/08 - 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is awesome! You have me sucked in completely. This is good because you've made Legolas a legend which he would have been, so I guess this is Middle-earth's distant future. I've never read any stories in that time frame that were good so I'll keep reading.

Author's Response: Thank you, When I started it, I was thinking, wow, lots of people are on here, mine isnt going to get read, but you proved me wrong, lol. Keep checking in time to time, usually on the weekend ill do some more chapters, this story WILL BE FREAKIN EPIC lol

Reviewer: LegolasLoverLimwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/08 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Whee! Legolas!! lol Argomir is beastly too. :D

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