*sniff* sweet and very touching! i love stories - like this one - that portray great love without being slash. very well done!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I like these kinds of stories, too. I don't care for slash, but as you say, you can portray great love without that being the case. Thanks you!
I currently have tears in my eyes, that is amazing! You have portrayed all of their characteristics extremely well and I am amazed. Keep writing! Namarie-Lady of the Lake
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding. I'm glad I could evoke a strong emotion, which was a goal in this story. I'm very pleased that you liked my characterizations. I always try to get those right. I'll keep writing! :o)