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so cute! in such a short story, you made me want to hug estel and take him home with me! very sweet!
Wish I had found such a comfort when I lost my naneth..
That was very good. Estel was cute! I think you did a good job with the emotions. Keep it up!
Too bad about missing the contest deadline; this was true to the prompt word, be assured.
Estel was just hugably sweet, innocently wise. "lullaby of the river" - a very true description. I love to fall asleep listening to running water. I'd imagine in Rivendell it must almost seem to bring an enchanted sleep. (Sorry, digressing).
I think it does take a child's hope to begin healing. From what I gathered in LotR, Legolas was a light-hearted guy but with many sorrows. I like that Estel was there at one of those harder parts of his life. I would like to see this friendship develop. *hint, nudge*
Touching story, Ila.
-Kitt : )
That was beautiful! I'm just stunned, you captured those feelings so well! Oh, and when little
Estel said he was growing up... that was just wow. very well done!
Aww. That was lovely. You captured Estel's voice really well; I love reading fics with Legolas and young Estel, and this one was particularly cute.