Ohhhhh creepy, if I thought that was happening to me I would have gone crazy or just sat on the floor and cried with the little girl. Really great chapter, was worth the wait. You're really getting the picture of what Aric is like and in trn what Haefwered is like and what she fears. The plot thickens with every installment - I love it! But who WHO will she fall for??? Ahhh update as soon as you can!
Brilliant chapter! ^_^
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was really stuck with this chapter because I wanted something to happen that would totally freak her out enough so that I could continue on with the plot. I will try and update as soon as possible! Thanks for the review! ~iggybaby
OH HELL NO! He did not just say what I think he did! Considered property in this society??? Oh my god I would have killed him there and there! But well done to Haefwered for telling him how it is! Honestly I'm surprised she didn't kick him where it hurts after what he did :P Great chapter! Thanks for updating so fast ^.^ Always eager for more!!! x Dragon
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying this! It makes the story though, it provides conflict between the traditionalist and the feminist :D You're welcome currently working on the next chappie ~iggybaby
Wha? This is end? NOOOOOOO! This is great! Any chance you could write more???
Author's Response: Whoops my bad! I mean that I had to end the chapter that way lol. There will def be more to the story, it has barely begun! ~iggybaby
Hmmm curiouser and curiouser lol! This is really picking up! Call me paranoid but I think there's something not quite right with how her brother died and then the ending with Aric! If I were there I'd either A)Run for my life B)give him one hell of a punch! lol. Nice to see that shes still strong and feminist - but when she was thinking about her brother - brought a tear to my eye! Beautifully written and put in really well with the scene! Please please please update soon! Dying over here! LOL ^.^
Author's Response: I am trying to make her a strong character but also keep her human. I try to show both sides of her to develop her character. The next chapter shows this also. Glad you are enjoying this! ~iggybaby
Wow, this is a fantastic story so far! Really amazing and interesting beginning. I love the fact that she's a feminist (being one myself :P) and I can't wait to see how that goes down in a time when women were classed as second-class citizens. (grrr.. stupid men)
I'm also really curious as to who she'll fall in love with, I'm kind of on the wall between Aric and Eomer? Maybe? Ha-Ha, anyway, great story - please continue writing it! :D x
Author's Response: I agree, stupid men! You will have to read on to find out! I will try and update it as often as possible! Thanks for the review! ~iggybaby