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Title: You All, Everybody Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
Hey Dae, I have updated my Bio, let me know what you think! (I put some of my favorite quotes at the bottom)


Author's Response: Nice quotes. I've only heard of one of them before:)) So, you like Jurassic Park? Awesome movies! I love them all. My favorite part in the third one is when the people get into the labs and in the background you see the raptor run by. *Shivers* I'm trying to write stories. A little hard because one series I'm going to post is called The Unknown Daughter of Feanor. The other series is Daewen which is my story in Middle-earth. Enough about me! Snowball fights are great aren't they? Namarie.
Date: Mar 11 2009 12:11 pm [Report This]
Title: You All, Everybody Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Ugh. Pippin! I wonder what that was...
Hmm. No, I don't think Elladan will survive. (Just kidding. But really...)
I almost, ALMOST feel sorry for gold team. But please continue to pester them! :D
Oh, yay! I seeing rules bent! Will the staff make the battle get, uh, uglier, I wonder?

Author's Response: Elladan. Yeah, don't you just love torture? Feel sorry? Hah! Never:)) Hm, Orli so far has been really nice. Does he have it in him I wonder? I guess we'll find out. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Mar 10 2009 03:23 pm [Report This]
Title: Plans Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Oh, Aragorn, you weeny! *aims snowball at King of Men* Ah, at least it ended well.
I was wondering when Elrohir would show up. Now gold team's got twice the evil. Oh dear.
*laughs* Geneva Convention!
Date: Mar 10 2009 03:18 pm [Report This]
Title: A new friend joins the battle Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
I liked seeing all these characters here, Dune... and am quite happy Dae's been saved from Sparrow's most Evil clutches! :D
Date: Mar 10 2009 03:14 pm [Report This]
Title: You All, Everybody Reviewer: Traveller Signed
Ohmygosh, I love "They're Taking the Hobbits to Isengard!" It makes me laugh! Lol, keep this up!


Author's Response: Yeah, the first time I heard They're Taking the Hobbits to Isengard, I was in the library trying not to crack up. Ah, I plan on keeping this up. Fei's craziness is rubbing off on me. BEWARE!! I will be posting some serious stories, I just need this humor right now in my life. Everything feels like a maelstrom and I need a way to relieve it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Mar 08 2009 07:45 pm [Report This]
Title: It's Only the Beginning . . . Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
Don't fear, Dune and his men are here! (laughs) I have been wanting to say that for a while!

Date: Mar 08 2009 10:14 am [Report This]
Title: Of Attack Plans and Captures Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Horror!!! Give me a musket and I'll blast them to gold ribbons... and then I'll take Sparrow to dinner. Yeah.
Hey, Gollum's captured! Does this mean we get to taunt him back? *rubs hands eagerly* No, that's mean, isn't it? And Valar know his self-esteem is teensy.
Don't die, Dae!
-Kitt :)
Date: Mar 08 2009 09:43 am [Report This]
Title: Of Attack Plans and Captures Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
Good chapter very suspenseful! Now it is my turn!

Date: Mar 08 2009 09:04 am [Report This]
Title: Sibling Rivalries Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Alright! Chocolate cookie!!!
*nods* Yeah, when it comes to sibling rivalry, the best thing to do is to walk back, slowly. (Although younger me would never have hesitated to go WHAM.)
Oh dear! Gollum's gonna get captured again... he's not going to be happy... especially if Aragorn does it...
"Some snooping!" Suspenseful! What sort of snoopin'?
-Kitt :)
Date: Mar 07 2009 03:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Guys Are . . . Disgusting Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
You most certainly made Van laugh! He’s much better now, but the fever’s still slightly there (just between you and me: his eyes totally lit up when I said, “Dae wrote a new snowball chapter—this one’s especially for you”). Van particularly liked the end where Gollum's complaining about being the one to do the dirty work and he laughed when he and Orli rolled their eyes after I said that guys are... disgusting. Excellent job! It’s hard to get Van to laugh when he’s feeling under the weather! I can’t wait to see what happens with Gollum. Will an abominable snowman come and eat him while he’s digging?

Date: Mar 07 2009 12:36 pm [Report This]
Title: It's Only the Beginning . . . Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
Good chapter! I was wondering when a new one was going to be added! Just remember Dae that me and my men are still waiting on the sidelines ready to jump in with our catapult and two cannons! Keep up the good work!

Signed by,
(Letter sent personally to Dae by wolf, and no you can't hold Mith as a prisoner!)

Lincoln: Hello there and who might you be?

Dune: (stands up and salutes) "Dunedain Ranger at your service Mr. President! Big fan of the Civil War sir!"

Lincoln: (laughs) at ease soldier! So you like the Civil War eh?

Dune: (Nods) Yes Mr. President, Pro-union all the way!

Lincoln: (Bends over and whispers in Dunes ear) I like your spirit boy, you make a fine soldier, carry on! (Walks away from Dune's camp)

(Shawn and Max walk over and look after the tall man)

Shawn: was that who I think it was?

Dune: yep Abraham Lincoln, president during the Civil War.

(Dune, Shawn and Max walk back to their tents, not even noticing as a certain Pirate spies on them.)

Jack Sparrow: (Rubs his chin) Now thats interesting!
Date: Mar 07 2009 12:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Guys Are . . . Disgusting Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Ewe, yeah, I can't imagine the mess. I mean guys are, well... *whispers* filthy.
Ah, no more Spock. At least we shan't have to hear him talk anymore!
Poor Smeagol, stuck with all the nesssty jobses. Hmm. But doesn't he like the nassty jobses? I guess digging through ice in a loincloth doesn't count. :D
Great! I'm anxious to know how *this* plan is going to turn out.
-Kitt :)
Date: Mar 07 2009 10:38 am [Report This]
Title: "A House Divided... Cannot Stand" Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
VERY filthy! So filthy theat they are drowning in filth, and it once again hurts their eyes to the extent of blindness! XD. Good chapter, Kitt! Keep goin'!

Date: Feb 13 2009 02:33 am [Report This]
Title: It's Only the Beginning . . . Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
(Dune turns to Shawn, Alex, Fletcher, Morion, Scratt, Henry, Tom, Josh and Mac) All right men! get the catapult ready. (Shawn, Fletcher, Alex, Morion and Scratt nod) and get the two cannon's armed with the snow cannonballs! (Henry salutes and so does Josh, Tom and Mac) "Aye sir they will be ready!" (Dune nods) All right then get to it! Dismissed!

Note to Dae: can't really add a chapter right now so I give you control of me and my character's. Do anything with them, but do not, I repeat do not, make them act like girls! (mock scowls and then laughs) Be right back need to add a new chapter to A slave no More!


Author's Response: *Rubs hands together* Okay . . . . Actually, I'll wait for Kitt to update the next chapter and I'll add on from there. This should be interesting . . . Fear me!
Date: Feb 12 2009 08:48 am [Report This]
Title: Elessar's Charge Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
(Dune grins when he sees them appear in his field of vision) Revenge is mine! Now it is my turn. (Arms catapult that he had gotten from Narnia, Prince Caspian) This should work!(Dune Grunts as he pushes huge snow balls into place) Ok now it is time for me to begin!
Date: Feb 12 2009 08:19 am [Report This]
Title: Infiltration Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
(A light flashes and Dune reappears) What I couldn't stay awya! (Peaks out from behind his rock and gasps!) What the? What the heck is going on?(Shakes his head and looks at the contraption he has brought with him) this had better work!
Date: Feb 12 2009 08:16 am [Report This]
Title: "Kelp"ing Out... Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
(Dune sighs) well so much for my big plan, Time for me to leave this story. (Picks up a book and mutters a spell, a light appears and Dune is gone) Merry looks over behind the rock "Now what was that?"

Good Job on the story Dae, I was trying to get you in the end but hey, my partner in crime got frozen! Keep up the good work! You may see me at the end.

Revenge shall be mine!
Date: Feb 12 2009 08:09 am [Report This]
Title: The Coming of the Snowball of Doom Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
(Dune Frowns as he watches Sparrow get frozen) Crap! well so much for that plan, but where did all the water come from! (Looks for snowballs and all are gone) Gosh dang it now I have to start over!
Date: Feb 12 2009 08:04 am [Report This]
Title: Jealousy in the midst of Battle Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
(Dune pulls Jack into his hiding place) I will be needing your help when you wake up, Captain! (continues making snowballs)
Date: Feb 12 2009 07:57 am [Report This]
Title: Uninvited Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
Crap! I am not going to fight a Dark Lord! (Dune ducks back behind his tree. he then looks over a Jack sparrow) I wonder... (Ducks as another snowball nails him) Aw come on! (Runs to a new spot) This is really getting cold, I need to arm myself! ( begins to make his on snowballs) this is going to take a while!
Date: Feb 12 2009 07:54 am [Report This]
Title: Ambush! Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
(Peaks out from behind a rock) Now what, yikes! (Ducks a snowball) where are those coming-SPLAT(Snowball hits Dunes face) Grrr!, I will get who ever threw that.

Author's Response: Me *waves*
Date: Feb 12 2009 07:50 am [Report This]
Title: It's Only the Beginning . . . Reviewer: Dunedain ranger of the North Signed
Hahahahahahahahaha! (Gasps for breath) This is hilatious, umf! ( Gets a snow ball in the face) I will get you for that Merry! (Throws a snow ball back and nails Merry) Bullseye! (suddenly he gets pelted by snowballs from Fei and Dae) "Get out of the story!" cries Fei. (Dune ducks again) ok bye!(ducks behind a tree) well I guess I could watch from behind here. (Snowball nails him in the face) Or not!
(Heads to another spot to view rest of action)

Author's Response: You should join in! You'd be great. Thanks for taking my advice:))
Date: Feb 12 2009 07:46 am [Report This]
Title: Elessar's Charge Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
“Yes, please, hurt Elladan. And give Legolas a wedgie.”

Hahaha! Love this line, it's said so accurately and casually but it's awesomely done! I'll keep reading!

Date: Feb 12 2009 04:48 am [Report This]
Title: Imposters, Tactics, and Delusional Teenage Masterminds Reviewer: Midnight Signed
Oh no! *Slaps face in cheesy horror* Merry is stealing Pippin's lines! By the way, great chapter! I love the boxer/briefs trick-qustion.
-Midnight §
Date: Feb 03 2009 12:59 pm [Report This]
Title: Imposters, Tactics, and Delusional Teenage Masterminds Reviewer: Traveller Signed
"...that's why the pawns go first." Haha! Great line! Love it! Keep it coming!

Date: Feb 02 2009 11:30 am [Report This]
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