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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Merry Signed
Very well written! I like this short little piece!

Author's Response: Wow. You write really short reviews, but manage to say what you want in them. I'm glad you've reviewed, though. Keep up writing your own brill stories! meerkatalex
Date: 07/01/09 - 03:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
"he would always be, as long as Merry was there to comfort him."
- A perfect ending. It's always so hard to end short stories, but you always do it brilliantly.
I've heard writing a scene from several POVs is a good exercise, so if you've the urge to write from Pip's, go for it! It would be a good contrast for Pip to comfort the "so much more mature" Merry from a fear (like, uh, squirrels? :P).
Altogether, another cute display of their affection!
-Kitt : )

Author's Response: Hehe! Squirrels! I'm trying to think of a good but not too silly fear for Merry, and may write from other people's POVs. I hope that you enjoyed reading my stories!
Date: 03/01/09 - 12:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: xFanarix Signed
Actually, I think it is lovely and charming just the way it is. You could add on a chapter from Pippins POV is you wished, but just as a one shot it is warmly and sweetly written on it's own.

Author's Response: I suppose I could write a seperate story, but I do intend to write another chapter from Pippin's POV when I have the chance. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/01/09 - 11:39 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Midnight Signed
That was really good! It shows just how close Merry and Pippin are.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That was the idea - to show that their friendship is very strong!
Date: 03/01/09 - 10:38 am [Report This]
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