Very well written! I like this short little piece!
Author's Response: Wow. You write really short reviews, but manage to say what you want in them. I'm glad you've reviewed, though. Keep up writing your own brill stories! meerkatalex
"he would always be, as long as Merry was there to comfort him."
- A perfect ending. It's always so hard to end short stories, but you always do it brilliantly.
I've heard writing a scene from several POVs is a good exercise, so if you've the urge to write from Pip's, go for it! It would be a good contrast for Pip to comfort the "so much more mature" Merry from a fear (like, uh, squirrels? :P).
Altogether, another cute display of their affection!
-Kitt : )
Author's Response: Hehe! Squirrels! I'm trying to think of a good but not too silly fear for Merry, and may write from other people's POVs. I hope that you enjoyed reading my stories!
Actually, I think it is lovely and charming just the way it is. You could add on a chapter from Pippins POV is you wished, but just as a one shot it is warmly and sweetly written on it's own.
Author's Response: I suppose I could write a seperate story, but I do intend to write another chapter from Pippin's POV when I have the chance. Thank you for reviewing!