Author's Response: Yay baby Elves! :D
One small thing - "undoubtably " should be undoubtedly :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and correction! Honestly, I don't know what I'd do without your help!
It's nice to see you back here after so long. I look forward to seeing more of your writings.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Karlmir! It's good to hear from you! It wasn't intended as a naughty entry, but hey, if it works, it works :-D. There was no hedge, though, so I hope you were behind a good sized tree or rock. Thanks for the review, and glad that you liked the story!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Thank you! I feel like Arwen doesn't get much credit in the character department...I've always wondered what it was like from her point of view and decided to write about it. I'm so glad that you like the story, it's reviews like yours that keep me writing. Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback!
And I'm not a genius! Just creative and bored.
Author's Response: More is on the way! I'm currently thinking up different entries.
Very romantic wedding scene, though. Nice job :-)
Yes, Johnny Cash played a little bit of a role in helping me find the title of WTL, haha :). Thanks for th praise. I'm pretty sure you do know what's going to happen next, but if you're thinking what I'm thinking, then there are a few events between that and the current entry that need to happen first. Looking forward to your email!
Okay, you caught me. So, do you like your elven name?
Next chapter of WTL is coming soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Thanks! I'm glad I captured the difference in age, I was worried about that!
I love this story. You had me crying with laughter at Arwens exploits! Do you still need a beta? If you do, I'd be happy to help you. E-mail me at email@example.com.
Sorry Sage, I already have a beta. But thanks for your review! I'm glad you found the story humorous!
Then she leaned forward and whispered in my ear that Glorfindel is horrible at arithmatic.
SHE KNOWS. BY THE VALAR, SHE KNOWS!!!
Author's Response: It was fun writing that, haha. Thanks for the review, it made me smile!
Author's Response: Okay!
Fei: *Throws head back and laughs at Maeniel* YOU GOT SERVED!
Maeniel: I didn’t order anything.
Caller: OOOOO! She *burned* you, Fei! *Bursts out laughing*
Fei: *Holds up apple pie*
Caller: *Immediately stops laughing* Don’t. Even. Think. About. It.
Nice Glorfindel and Maeniel dialogue! *Claps*
Author's Response: Thanks Fei! Sorry that I haven't posted our team-effort story yet...I've been busy and I've been trying to work on it as much as possible!
Arwen and Elrohir: *Swinging swords*
Elrohir: *Sneaks a peak at the assembled group of giggling girls. Winks at the crowd and lowers sword, turns to Arwen* Alright, my sister, you are in need of rest and I am in need of… *Walks over to squealing girls* Hello ladies… *Grins in a cheesy Play Boy manor and twirls sword around his fingers. Puffs out chest concededly*
A few ladies start drooling, and then faint.
Me: *Rolls eyes*
Elrohir: *Starts using terrible pick-up lines*
Arwen: *Begins to swing sword in air as she performs a few basic moves as she waits for her imprudent brother to stop ‘charming’ maidens into swooning*
Elrohir: *Turns to me, when the rest of the group has fainted* Hey babe, I’m like a Rubix Cube – the more you play with me, the harder I get. *Grins*
Me: *Mouth drops open and eyes widen, raises leg to kick Elrohir in the family jewels*
Arwen: Hey Elrohir! Think fast! *Aims sword for his stomach, but as he’s turning, hits him below the belt instead*
Elrohir: *Winces and dramatically doubles over* The pain! The horror! The AGONY!
Arwen: *Cringes and looks innocently the other way*
Me: *Laughs, then high fives Arwen* You go girl! *Walks away laughing hysterically*
Author's Response: That was hilarious! You have a great sense of humor! Go Fei!