Arwen and Elrohir: *Swinging swords*
Elrohir: *Sneaks a peak at the assembled group of giggling girls. Winks at the crowd and lowers sword, turns to Arwen* Alright, my sister, you are in need of rest and I am in need of… *Walks over to squealing girls* Hello ladies… *Grins in a cheesy Play Boy manor and twirls sword around his fingers. Puffs out chest concededly*
A few ladies start drooling, and then faint.
Me: *Rolls eyes*
Elrohir: *Starts using terrible pick-up lines*
Arwen: *Begins to swing sword in air as she performs a few basic moves as she waits for her imprudent brother to stop ‘charming’ maidens into swooning*
Elrohir: *Turns to me, when the rest of the group has fainted* Hey babe, I’m like a Rubix Cube – the more you play with me, the harder I get. *Grins*
Me: *Mouth drops open and eyes widen, raises leg to kick Elrohir in the family jewels*
Arwen: Hey Elrohir! Think fast! *Aims sword for his stomach, but as he’s turning, hits him below the belt instead*
Elrohir: *Winces and dramatically doubles over* The pain! The horror! The AGONY!
Arwen: *Cringes and looks innocently the other way*
Me: *Laughs, then high fives Arwen* You go girl! *Walks away laughing hysterically*
Author's Response: That was hilarious! You have a great sense of humor! Go Fei!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad this story is working out! I was nervous about it when I first got the idea!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I continue to make you laugh.
Don't worry...this is very very very far from the end. I'm chronicalling all of Arwen's life. That is, from when she recieves the diary/diaries to when she writes her last entry on one of the last days of her life. She may lose the diary for about a thousand years though...if I was to write an entry for each day of her life I'd have a TON of writing to do. It'd be impossible!
But yes, I will update soon. By soon I mean by tomorrow.
I have had many different experiences like this in my life, they can be the most fustrating things in the world!
Thank you for updating, and keep writing!
Author's Response: Yes, I agree wholeheartedly...those kinds of experiences drive me crazy. Thanks for the kind reviews!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the story!
Lol, Arwen have a bit of ADD?
P.S. Yeah, we should totally start a Pie Battle Story! That would be great fun!
My midterms end on....this upcoming Tuesday. I'll try to update as much as possible, but this all depends on what test is coming up. This weekend I'll probably stay off of the computer...my grade in Pre-Calculus is absolutely horrible, and if I want to be able to go on the computer at all, I'll need to bring it up with this exam grade.
P.S. How would we start this pie battle story? Hmm....contact me via the "contact me" link (or whatever it's called) on my bio page. We can digitally brain-storm together.
P.P.S. When I was six I thought that brain-storms were when you thought too hard and it started to rain.
P.S. *Narrows eyes. The badge on Fei’s shoulder that reads “Best Digital Cone Warrior of the Third Age” flashes menacingly as Fei picks up her first pie and takes aim…* IT IS *SO* ON!!!
P.S. I think I'm going to write a story about you and me digital pie battling. This semi-inside joke needs to confuse more people than it already does, lol. It's pretty funny.
Author's Response: Yeah...though when she meets Aragorn she is out of the teenage-Arwen-hormonal phase. Plus Aragorn doesn't reject her, so she will be happier and less moody.
I know, right? *kicks Glorfindel in the shins*
no scoops for him.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Author's Response: I'm planning to continue into her life, through the War of the Ring, and afterwards. I don't know how many 'entries' this will take, but I plan to chronicle all of Arwen's life. I'm thinking that she might misplace the diary for about 1,000 years or so, then find it again.
The only thing I've taken from my own life and put in Arwen's story was the entry on how she got the Evenstar necklace.
If my friends have had rebellious experiences like Arwen's, then they haven't told me :)
To tell you the truth, I don't really know where I'm getting some of these experiences for Arwen. I kind of type whatever feels right...I go with the flow of the story. Though, I'm going to look through my library at home to see if any of these experiences Arwen is having are similar to some literary examples.
Yeah, Glorfindel would be absolutely gorgeous had he been in the movies. It would be hard to determine a winner if there were to be a battle over fangirls between Legolas and Glorfindel.
It would be hard to exclude Elladan and Elrohir...one, they're awesome, two, they're Arwen's older brothers and therefore would be hard to ignore.
Author's Response: Okay! Thanks for the clarification!
Once more, great job, and keep writing! (Please :))
Thanks for the review! I knew what you were saying about the modern day times and LOTR times. You don't know how much this review means to me...this compliment lets me know that I've been doing a good job with making Arwen's voice fit with the time that she's living in and keeping her understandable.
I've worried about that since I started this story.
P.S. Thanks for answering my question on Glorfindel; I thought it was like that.
P. P. S. Ooo, a catfight is brewing! Arwen VS. Maeniel! FIGHT!
Author's Response: Sorry, but if you want my chef hat you need to engage in a pie battle. LET THE WAR BEGIN!
I just wanted to say...
Sorry Ar-Feiniel!! I put too many scoops on my computerized ice-cream cone and it went out of the text box and across the page. It made the webpage a mess and I had to get rid of my response to the review, which unfortunately means I had to delete your review :(
but to answer your question, Glorfindel is supposed to appear like he's about 24 or 25 years old at this point in time. I don't know how many elf years that is. Just to give you a little perspective into the rest of the family, Elladan and Elrohir are supposed to appear around 18-20 years old at this point in Arwen's timeline.
She has a crush on Glorfindel in the way a teenage girl would have a crush on Orlando Bloom lol
Also...I admit my defeat in the text-box ice-cream cone war that has been raging between us. You win. If it weren't for the text box, I would prove that I am the better digital cone warrior. But too many bytes have been killed in the making of this text response, so I yeild.
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Arwen has a little Mortal blood, although strictly speaking she is not ' half-Elven. ' so I would imagine her maturing would be much the same as Elves. Elves reach adulthood at 50, although may not attain their full stature and growth until 100. Elves can walk and talk ( fluently ) by age two although they remain looking like children far longer than Mortals. By 110, she would not sound like a teenager, but a mature woman. I would make her younger in your story ( about 35-40 ) to match her young voice. :)
Author's Response: Okay! Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!
You have ENTIRELY too much free time lol (jk jk don't shoot me... or kick me in the shins!!! *wince*)
Keep up the AMAZINGLYAWESOMEFANTABULOUS work that you do!
Author's Response: I wouldn't dream of kicking you in the shins...you're the one with the bow and arrows in your room. Well, actually....I run faster then you so this might work out for me. Plus it'd take you a while to string your bow, and I'd be waaaay outta range by then. Hahahaha
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Sometimes I think I make her sound a little bit too young though...well, she is only 110, which is who knows how young in human years. So never mind!
Author's Response: Actually, that's my plan. I'm going to update this every day if I can! Of course, some entries will be shorter. Some will be skipped.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!