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Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi! This is very funny! Well, that was an unexpected end to the story; imagine it just being a wasp! I was thinking of a fearful, large, scary creature, and then I found out it was a wasp! Lol! However I must admit that even tiny insects like spiders are scary to most people, which proves your point. Well this is good, as I have said, and I can see only one mistake -

"soothe hs bruised ego." I think you missed out out an 'i'. Otherwise, this is flawless! It's well-written and I like it that his almost least-favourite Elf helped him in the end. Well done again!

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Ooh thanks! Fixed that now. Glad you liked the story. Hehe, even a brave warrior has his weaknesses! I'm having a rediculous amount of fun with these two. :P

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