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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I liked it --- short and sweet (well, I dunno is “sweet” is the right word, but I liked the alteration :P). And it totally owns my poetry.

Fei’s Couplet:

What was the source of such dismay,
to think the world so cold and grey?

I really particularly liked the last too lines, clever. Way to go!


Author's Response: Yeah, short is about right! :D Your couplet is interesting and thought-prokoking. I've had this on my mind for a while, and thought I may as well post it! Thanks! meerkatalex
Date: 10/02/09 - 07:11 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Traveller Signed
Short and sweet yet effective. Good job!


Author's Response: Thanks, Traveller! How is your own story going? meerkatalex
Date: 10/02/09 - 06:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: callerofcrows Signed
It's a great poem. Very short, but poignant and clear-cut. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks, callerofcrows! I'm going to read and review some of your stories, and thanks for the review! meerkatalex
Date: 10/02/09 - 03:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
It's simple, which is nice. It might be a little more satisfying to read if it weren't in freeverse format. (Not denying freeform isn't fun, but sometimes a poem will benefit from rhyming). Overall, my first impression was favorable, and it slightly reminded me of the Raven by Poe. Practice makes perfect. NZ

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! They are lovely and full of tips and hints and constructive critisism, which is very helpful! Good luck in your own writing! meerkatalex
Date: 10/02/09 - 03:12 pm [Report This]
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