Reviews For The Storm of War
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Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/02/09 - 01:01 pm Title: The Storm of War

You might want to substitute "troops" or "Orkish regiments" for "armies" in the second verse, as there were actually only two armies arrayed against Men during the WotR---Sauron's and Saruman's. Other than that, fine job.

Author's Response: 'Armies' is implied here as a large group of 'people' gathered to fight a purpose. Even if this 'purpose' is a 'stupid' one. But as always, thank you for your review! -Midnight

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