Reviews For The Seaside Realm
You must login (register) to review.
Title: Chapter Three: Ropes and Buttons Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Yay! The Seaside Realm is finally on the web! WOOOO! Great job filtering the descriptive bits in, very nice. But, uh, you might want to check the formatting—the paragraphs and dialogue are either smashed together or weirdly broken apart. Overall, *High Five*! What’s next?

Author's Response: Ya I noticed put I had to put it up fast. I'll go fix that now. Ish. I think next is either something of yours or one of those others I have half started. I do need to continue this one though. There will be more chapters!!
Date: 03/01/09 05:43 pm [Report This]
You must login (register) to review.