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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 - 02:10 pm Title: 1/1

:) Legolas always is getting paid back. When will he learn?

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 - 07:48 pm Title: 1/1

-Faramir and Aragorn planning comeuppance on Legolas-

Faramir: *Rolling map out in front of Aragorn* Alright, if we are going to hunt Legolas, we need to look in the places he would most likely be in.
Aragorn: Obviously.
Faramir: *Pointing to random locations on the map* Legolas could be, here, here, here, or HERE.
Aragorn: Legolas would mostly likely be THERE.
Faramir: *Circles location with a quill* Right, weapon of choice?
Aragorn: Fists.
Faramir: No water balloons this time, my King?
Aragorn: Nay, not this time. *Smiles at memory* I am saving them for Eldarion’s upcoming birthday party.
Faramir: Very well. When did the letter you received from Legolas say he would be able to get here?
Aragorn: Today, actually.
Faramir: Oh, well, then… *Rises from table dramatically* Let’s hunt some Legolas!

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I’m really sorry about that. The scene just popped into my head when Aragorn thought, ‘And when Legolas comes I will hunt him down for giving my son this bizarre idea to be an elf. He will pay for it dearly.’ Nice line, by the way.

Aw, this is sweet. Legolas gets to be Eldarion’s role-model. I like how Aragorn curses Legolas for bringing this upon him *evil chortle*, that’s sooo Legolas-and-Aragorn. Great job on the dialogue. I like how you portrayed Eldarion, too!

Fei.

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 - 07:03 pm Title: 1/1

I like it. However, I would enjoy another chapter. Keep finding plot bunnies!

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