I can only second what xfanarix already said, this is incredibly hot! Well done, I love your Celegorm! ~ Amaranth/Lintalome ~
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm really enjoying your story about Cirdan and Maglor. I hope to get some time to read the new chapter today. Thank again :)
I think you are excellent at erotica. This is so steamy.. that is what Noldor passion should be like! It's no good Tolkien telling me the Elves were not like this, especially the FŽanorions, since this, and only this fits them.
Actually it has occurred to me there is very little good het-erotica around, so it is great to see this - if there was more I would read more :)
This is very much how I envisage him - his brothers, and definitely his father. I think you captured that passion brilliantly.
Author's Response: I can't see them any other way. I think they would have to dominate in their love life and I think it would have been like everything they do intense. Feanor and Nerdanel didn't seem hold back,, so I figure his sons would have some of that same fire. Thank you for reading it! It is always a treat to get a review from you! :DD