I've finally got around to read this. This is really beautiful. The emotions you describe are especially powerful and it shows how torn Elladan is.
Good job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Elladan really is torn :( I do torture him so XD
This is a great representation of how Elladan would think. I personally don't know what they chose.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing :) Personally I like to think of the twins as choosing the Elven path and being with their parents, but sometimes it's good to consider the other options ^_^
A good thought about the fate of twins, I am now trying to think if there are any in Tolkien who had any luck whatsoever O_o
This is written clearly from the soul and it's very good!
Author's Response: XD I was only thinking about Elrond and Elros and then suddenly I thought, "Wait...the twin sons of Dior, they died, right?" Dived to my bookshelf and discovered that was the most likely case :( Poor things. Thanks for reviewing :)
Sad, but I think it reflects Elladan's feelings quite well... And my sympathy goes out to you; I know how having to watch someone decide something so important can hurt... But great job writing this! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I find it easier to deal with things if I can fictionalize it and distance the problem from me. Thanks for reviewing!