Very well done. There's more going on here than might be evident on the surface. We're all part of that hard fought battle, are we not?
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, we all fight the monsters in our own way. I looked at your profile, I hope you don't mind, and I would highly recommend you try reading the Dresden Files. It's a series of books about a modern day wizard who lives in Chicago. It's become my latest addiction reading.
Hmm... This is really good! Nice job with the words you used!
Author's Response: Thanks, that makes me feel a lot better. Like I said, I typically hate poetry, but, as I was always told by my English teachers, it really is the best way to express those deep emotions. Writing helped me a lot. I'm glad you liked it.