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Reviewer: Midnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 - 09:47 pm Title: Aragorn--A Haiku

Of course Aragorn does not care if he smells bad or not. He is a RANGER for peats sake.

That was really cute thought.


Author's Response:

Well, he might want to consider smell if he's tracking something. If it got down-wind of him it would know where he was and run far, far away. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/05/09 - 01:39 am Title: Aragorn--A Haiku

This series of haiku is a very clever concept. As a fan of the form, I encourage you to make your haiku as densely meaningful as possible.

Author's Response: I will do more meaningful haikus after I finish these silly ones. I'm glad you like the idea of LOTR haikus. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 - 03:02 pm Title: Aragorn--A Haiku

Too true! I am *more* than certain he smells bad. :D

Author's Response: Yep! He's running, fighting, tracking...he's probably pretty gross smelling! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Narya Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/05/09 - 10:45 am Title: Aragorn--A Haiku

Actually, though this IS funny, there's a very poignant note to it too. I think it's that last line, "Not that it matters." Maybe it's just me reading too much into things, but that feels like quite a sad, bleak closing line. That's not a criticism; it's a good thing, as getting more than one emotion into so few words is not easy at all! Well done :-)

Author's Response: I see what you mean, the ending can be sad, but I intended for it to be sort of like a shrug after a thought. Aragorn thinks about running, and how he needs to bathe and then is like, "Meh, I'm a ranger, and I'm down-wind." Thanks for the review!

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