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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: winner Signed
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Date: 10/04/15 - 02:26 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Bearer of Light Anonymous
Wow, they really had an impact on a lot of stuff. I would not want to see what happens if the enemy has their hand on that book. Ooo! Does Glory like Frodo? -Beol
Date: 12/07/09 - 02:16 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Bearer of Light Anonymous
Hmm... Very interesting. I've never saw an lotr story like this. This is very excellent for your first story but there are a few errors. I suggest that you get a beta-reader (editor) who would read over your chapters to make sure there are'nt any errors. Next chapter! -Beol

Author's Response: I do have a Beta reader as originally there were me and a friend who where writing this but I have taken over writing it and she now beta's for me. Obviously some things were missed lol. Would be able to tell me where the errors that you saw where so I can make sure they are fixed. Thanks so much for the review and I'm glad you like the story :) Yes, Frodo does like Glory and Alexia/Legolas.
Date: 12/07/09 - 01:54 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bearer of Light Anonymous
(sighs) I was just starting to get hopeful too. I feel so sorry for the children and their parents. Does this story take place after isilder took the ring from sauron? -Beol
Date: 12/07/09 - 01:36 pm [Report This]
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