An amazing ending to an amazing story. I'm sad to see the end, but at the same time, I was excited to find out how everything closed. You've got lots of talent, and I look forward to reading and reviewing whatever else you choose to write!
AAH! Why did you do that? Please update soon! This is a great story! The suspense...can't...hold...on...
Author's Response: *grins evilly* I know, I know... it's a cliffhanger! What's funny is originally I didn't intend to have this story go where it went. You can be sure for another update within at least a week, most likely less. -Fay
Okay, so i was thinking to myself half way through this chapter that Bree would be pulled out of this MS story and continue writing the walker story. This was not what i expected... Not good. Not good at all for everyone in lower earth. What happens next??
Author's Response: Ah, I can't tell you yet, that would ruin the fun! ;P Don't worry though, the next chapters WILL be posted, I'm just not sure how soon yet. Like I said to callerofcrows, the last chapters are going to be bigger, and I want to get them right. Stay tuned! -Fay
Yikes! What's going on? I can't wait for the next chapter. You really have me hooked on this story.
Author's Response: Sorry to leave you on a cliffhanger, although it was my intention. :) The next few chapters or four are really important, so it is probably going to take me longer to put them up. I want to make sure they are exactly how I want them to be, and they are generally going to be longer than the previous chapters. -Fay
Baby Gimli is adorable! Well, the lisp definitely moves him into annoying fluff territory. Nevertheless, I feel motivated to write a Gimli-as-todder story. Oh, wrong, so wrong.
Author's Response: You're right. Oh how wrong it is...a cute little Gimli. Writing it made ME confused! :) Glad you like it. -Fay
Yikes! Gollum, right? Oh no! He's so creepy.
Author's Response: Yep. Sometimes he scares me to death! He used to really freak me out. This chapter was inspired a bit by a nightmare I had when I was younger... *shivers*
Heh! Typical mary-sues. Takes them an awfully long time to detect sarcasm.:) At least bree tried to tell her sister that she was in LE. Wait.. Is there a higher earth coz there's middle-e and lower earth. That is a good idea! I don't think anyone ever tried writing another walker in the hobbit. Will be waiting for the next update... -Beol
Author's Response: Mary Sues really never do get it do they? And I can't say yet how Lower, Middle, and Higher Earth all tend to work out, again another plot bunny I haven't fully put to use yet. I am very tempted to start on that 16th Walker, and I think it would make a nice challenge too. Maybe after I am done with my current projects I can start on that! -Fay
Short but- Aww! Baby gimli sounds so adorable! (coddles lil gimli and leggy) Well, i guess bree is in a better situation than last time. Excellent job with the fluff. What's gonna happen next?
Author's Response: haha I still have the image of a tiny Gimli and Leggy in my mind. They ARE adorable...it was fun writing something so fluffy and ridiculous! Well I'm sorry for the short chapter, but the next one I'm working on at the moment is longer, you'll just have to wait till I put it up to find out what happens... -Fay
Sarcasm should qualify as a foreign language! I find it hard to understand a lot of the time. Good chapter, can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: You know, I would say English is my second language, most of what I speak is pure sarcasm. ;P Bree tends to be that way as well. I'll try to update soon! -Fay
lol! this is good and really funny! Will I get sentenced too? ;)
Author's Response: hehe thanks. I think we ALL at some point deserve to serve a sentence, for now I am safe. But I'm sure I will find a note informing me of my lifetime sentence any day now. ;P
Oh no! Yiiikes! Don't kill her off! I love this story too much, it shouldn't end so soon! Please update! I love your writing.
Author's Response: Not to worry! :) It ain't over till the fat lady sings. She's not dead, and this story isn't going to end anytime soon. I love writing it too much to be done with it.
Sorry if I'm gushing, but I absolutely adore this series. It strikes home, and is really honest. Bree is believable, and the stereo-typical Legomancing Tenth-Walker Mary-Sue is just great. Other than a few grammatical errors, this story is perfect. Keep doing what you're doing, and I can't wait until the next chapter!