I'm in love with this story. Absolutely in love with it. This is absolutely brilliant!
As far as tenth walker and Kansas go, you haven't happened to read my story, Walking the Line, have you? When I saw Kansas mentioned it made me chuckle.
This is such a great story.
Author's Response: Well thanks! This came as in inspiration to me when looking through my own story and finding how awfully Mary Sue it was! I decide to make fun of it and create a kind of parody of fanfic, and all the mistakes most people make. Oh and no I haven't read your 'Walking the Line' story, BUT I actualy do really love 10th walker stories when they're written well so I think I'll check it out. Kansas was purely a random state I thought of. :)