Sorry if I'm gushing, but I absolutely adore this series. It strikes home, and is really honest. Bree is believable, and the stereo-typical Legomancing Tenth-Walker Mary-Sue is just great. Other than a few grammatical errors, this story is perfect. Keep doing what you're doing, and I can't wait until the next chapter!
I'm in love with this story. Absolutely in love with it. This is absolutely brilliant!
As far as tenth walker and Kansas go, you haven't happened to read my story, Walking the Line, have you? When I saw Kansas mentioned it made me chuckle.
This is such a great story.
This is freaking hilarious! Absolutely LOVED it - can only imagine how many years my sentence would be! HA! Quite an entertaining perspective . . . thanks for the laugh. Erullisse
Author's Response: Your welcome! *grins* Oh and I decided to make the story longer and more than just a one page piece, so I would read on. ;) -Fay