I like the somewhat dark and dreamy feeling of this chapter. I really could feel Clawface's fright, guilt and confusion.
Aw, so was Eonwe just a dream, or did she really visit him...?
Keep going. This is great. ^^
I would have to say pretty good so far. A half blood wolf! Different. I would like to read more of this.
Lots of suspenseful stuff! I liked Wildspirit’s countdown there.
The plan was clever. Trust Wargs to be, ah, not terribly smart.
Sad that only Blackfang knew his mother. :(
Whew! I was worried for Wildspirit! Still, that leg is going to be trouble.
And more of the lovely suspense: It could, and did, get a lot worse.
It’s the proverbial out of the frying pan and into the fire. I hope they can figure a way out of this new mess…
Author's Response: Yeah, I always pictured wargs as being very aggressive and overly brave, like stupidly brave. Read your Ottysey, by the way, and love it!
Wha?? Dead?? Gotta be kiddin with me... That's horrible! The rest of them were able to escape but he didn't?? Next one, please! -Beol
Author's Response: I'm not saying anything. Thank you for r&ring.
I liked how their different personalities shine through. Excape from Isengard sounds exciting. I wonder if they will make it.
Author's Response: I'm not giving anything away, but Wildspirit narrates the next chapter.
Ooo! This story really caught my attention. I always wondered how saruman got wargs on his army. I must say that your writing style is likining to Erin Hunter's (Warriors/Seekers). I do hope they will escape! More please! -Beol
Author's Response: Well, Erin Hunter did give me a lot of inspiration. I'm typing as fast as I can!
Interesting concept. I always wondered at what distiguishes a wolf from a warg. I thought this clever: While me and Pearleye were warg-sized wolves, warg-sized wolves, he was more like a wolf-sized warg.
This sounds exciting. Do continue! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on Chapter 1 right now. There's more action and less description, and it'll probably take longer as I plan to fit more in. Again, thanks.