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Title: 4-Clawface Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Update! YAY!
I like the somewhat dark and dreamy feeling of this chapter. I really could feel Clawface's fright, guilt and confusion.
Aw, so was Eonwe just a dream, or did she really visit him...?
Keep going. This is great. ^^
Date: 09/02/10 - 06:44 pm [Report This]
Title: 4-Clawface Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
I would have to say pretty good so far. A half blood wolf! Different. I would like to read more of this.
Date: 09/02/10 - 05:31 pm [Report This]
Title: 3-Sunblaze Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Yay! Updates!!!!
Lots of suspenseful stuff! I liked Wildspirit’s countdown there.
The plan was clever. Trust Wargs to be, ah, not terribly smart.
Sad that only Blackfang knew his mother. :(
Whew! I was worried for Wildspirit! Still, that leg is going to be trouble.
And more of the lovely suspense: It could, and did, get a lot worse.
It’s the proverbial out of the frying pan and into the fire. I hope they can figure a way out of this new mess…

Kitt :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I always pictured wargs as being very aggressive and overly brave, like stupidly brave. Read your Ottysey, by the way, and love it!
Date: 06/09/09 - 07:14 am [Report This]
Title: 2-Wildspirit Reviewer: Bearer of Light Anonymous
Wha?? Dead?? Gotta be kiddin with me... That's horrible! The rest of them were able to escape but he didn't?? Next one, please! -Beol

Author's Response: I'm not saying anything. Thank you for r&ring.
Date: 27/07/09 - 05:50 pm [Report This]
Title: 1-Pearleye Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
I liked how their different personalities shine through. Excape from Isengard sounds exciting. I wonder if they will make it.

Author's Response: I'm not giving anything away, but Wildspirit narrates the next chapter.
Date: 26/07/09 - 06:40 pm [Report This]
Title: 1-Pearleye Reviewer: Bearer of Light Anonymous
Ooo! This story really caught my attention. I always wondered how saruman got wargs on his army. I must say that your writing style is likining to Erin Hunter's (Warriors/Seekers). I do hope they will escape! More please! -Beol

Author's Response: Well, Erin Hunter did give me a lot of inspiration. I'm typing as fast as I can!
Date: 26/07/09 - 11:48 am [Report This]
Title: Prologue-Silvermoon Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Interesting concept. I always wondered at what distiguishes a wolf from a warg. I thought this clever: While me and Pearleye were warg-sized wolves, warg-sized wolves, he was more like a wolf-sized warg.
This sounds exciting. Do continue! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on Chapter 1 right now. There's more action and less description, and it'll probably take longer as I plan to fit more in. Again, thanks.
Date: 26/07/09 - 10:21 am [Report This]
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