Very good, you could feel the sadness and longing to be with someone you love.
Author's Response: Wow. I didn't realize how long it's been since I'd written that. Thank you! It's great to get a reminder review :).
Again you pour a lot of emotion into few lines. I always like your theme of silence. You've given it many forms and stories. :)
Ah, so is the narrator Arwen?
My favorite line was this: 'I feel the scream fighting it's way out of my mouth.' Powerful!
Author's Response: Thank you! For some reason, silence just works for me.