Reviews For SWAT Team
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Reviewer: sylc Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 1

This story made me laugh! Oh, I really enjoyed reading this piece, Ria. Thank you for sharing it.

Author's Response: Well, the silly muse escaped and went capering over the page naked (except for her clown wig and swim flippers). I'm glad if it entertains other people besides myself.

Reviewer: Elanor Fay Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah! you've caught me at last! *sheepish grin* LOL! I have misused commas beyond count and I hardly edit my work as far as punctuation goes. So was this inspired by my horrible grammar track record? (because really, I know how bad it is sometimes.) ;P
Great work! Keep it up!


Author's Response: Well, everyone makes mistakes (and perhaps the electronic form encourages us to publish before we polish -- I like what your story has to say about the lure of reviews), but my story was not aimed at you. Instead, I was reading your story rather late at night and began to think about what other sorts of punishments that bad authors might earn.

Reviewer: Nieriel Raina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL! If there is one thing that gets my goat it's a lack of respect for grammar and punctuation.

Author's Response: Yes. I sometimes fantasize about going on a graffiti spree to eliminate misused quotation marks and apostrophes on city signage. Of course -- sigh -- it's all too easy for me to make the mistakes.

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