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Title: Forgotten Reviewer: Lisse Signed
I love this sad verse. I think everyone who has ever taken the risk to love can identify with this. If we are very very lucky we find the one who is true and stays.

Author's Response: Thanks again for the reviews! They keep the spirit feeling wanted.
Date: Aug 04 2010 09:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Forgotten Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
This reminds me of The Song of Nimrodel from The Fellowship. Was that the goal...? Because her love left on a ship and left her alone too. (Sorta)

Very well done though, whatever it was written based off of.

Author's Response: Actually, no it wasn't, but I did notice that once I posted it. I just felt abandoned at that point in time and it came out of that. Thanks for the review!
Date: Jul 26 2010 07:04 pm [Report This]
Title: Forgotten Reviewer: Ireth Celebrindal Signed
Stunningly plaintive anaphora and choice of words. You captured a lot in three short free-verse stanzas. Personally, I'm partial to reading free verse. Very vivid images created in the reader's mind.

Good work!


Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: Sep 02 2009 09:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Forgotten Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Oo! Dark, just dripping with bitterness. Nicely done, Dae! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You've reviewed all my things here. Yeah, I wanted that emotion out. I guess I did it!
Date: Sep 02 2009 12:06 pm [Report This]
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