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Reviewer: Lisse Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 - 12:06 am Title: Sometimes

This is wonderous! I should know this, but who is Peredhil?

Author's Response: Actually, Peredhil means half-elven. I'm referring to Elladan. He's my muse ;)

Reviewer: Luna Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 - 01:21 am Title: Sometimes

Enjoyed this short poem! i too like the :

You take my weapon away, fling it into the oak.
It trembles like my body in your arms.

Nice :)



Author's Response: :) Perfect description, isn't it?

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 - 07:45 pm Title: Sometimes

Powerful words! I like the one-word at the end of each stanza, always starting with a P. My favorite line was the comparison between the trembling sword and body.

Author's Response: Thanks. I've always had a 'soft spot' for Elladan:)

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