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Reviewer: Mari Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/11/09 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 21- Water conservation hoses

UGH!!! MOTHERS!!!!!
crazy idea. have Robyn tell her momshe is an adult and that she does not need to be so controlling!!!
Great chapter!

Reviewer: Lilmissy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/11/09 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?!

hmmmm....I don't like this Evangeline girl...
>:(

Reviewer: Lilmissy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/11/09 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 15- The Elven Prince

Ah! A cliffhanger O_O

That was such a sweet moment between Leggy and Kim :)

Good job

Reviewer: Samara Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/11/09 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1- The beginning

Oh exams are blergh! I'm out of high school luckily so I forget that now's exam/midterm time. Blech.

You are being so true to his works. It's amazing. Especially with that twist about the ring. It's just great. And I gotta say it again, I love how you're portraying my favorite character, my ranger. So often it just doesn't seem right. But with you, you do a perfect job. You're great. *hugs!*

Good luck on your exams! You'll kick testy ass!

Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/11/09 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 20- Grounded

UGH!!!! SO EVIL PARENTS!!!
i would have said go to hell I'm 18 and slammed the door on their faces. Then tell Gilmi that I did that as revenege for his nose.

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/11/09 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter 20- Grounded

Aw! “Rise and polish.” :D
Excellent observation about Frodo. He really must have more willpower than the movie lets on… you must experience it to believe it.
That’s sad! What’s going on between Legolas and Kim. She totally does deserve him.
Hehe! I’m glad Pippin’s hotdogs weren’t horrible! “I bet my gaffer would love these.” Sam said. – So funny…
Ohmigosh! Evengaline actually fixed the axe! It’s not just amazing because it’s *her* but also because that can’t be a common skill. :)
THEY HID IN THE SAME PLACES??? Goodness, there’s no words for this… wow. That’s hilarious.
AND ROBYN’S GROUNDED? Of all things to happen…!
I hope the music exam goes well. ^^

Reviewer: Samara Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/09 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go...

Oh. My.. God. This story is absolutely, without a doubt one of the most spectacular works I have EVER read. You, my dear, are an absolute genius. A gem among authors. A true writer. A true Tolkien. The emotion, the friendships, the humor, the everything makes this story such a pleasure to read. Please update soon. I'll be waiting eagerly. You're incredible. I love this. Love it. I never want it to end.

I love how you portray Aragorn. Robyn can has hug from the ranger? *smiles and laughs* I like Leggy, but Aragorn's my favorite. I love him in any role he's put into and your role of big brother/best friend/kinda father/uncle/everything loving and true just makes me smile and want to curl up with him and have him protect me. And that cheesiness could be because you write Robyn so well, you completely allow me to immerse myself in her personality. I become her when I read, feeling her feelings, crying her tears, smiling her smiles, fighting her fears. (Hey, that rhymed.) This story is a gift and I hope you never stop writing it. Riddles, portals and more...you're outstanding and you'll always have a fan and reader in me.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind comment T^T It means a lot to me. I really do want to be dedicated to Tolkien's works coz he's amazing!!! XD I'll try my best to update soon...sadly exams are keeping me from it T^T gahhh high school exams are so troublesome lolz~ I only have 3 more to go so I should be on my way to writing very soon XD

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/09 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go...

“She would’ve been cool…if she wasn’t so arrogant.” – My thoughts exactly. I mean, c’mon, ‘small dwarf guy’? The dwarf’s in mourning now!

Squee!!! The Fellowship is cute! So it wasn’t an irrational love – there’s a lot tied to that axe.

I liked Robyn’s thoughts over the Fellowship. It will be sad if the time comes that they have to say goodbye… :'(

Not a depressing chapter at all. Good luck on the exams!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the reviews! XD I was so scared to put up my writing coz I thought that people might not like it T^T so thank you for all the kind comments. I really appreciate it! Oh and I read your Ottysey O_O you're really good at writing!!! I'll try my best on the exams XD hehe I should really be studying but I keep procrastinating and keep on writing my fanfic instead =3=" (not good...grrr...)

Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/09 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go...

OH!! the poor thing!!

Reviewer: Tinker Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/09 - 08:18 am Title: Chapter 18- Evangeline

WOW! intense chapter

"Kim scrunched up her nose and pretended to stab Evangeline with an invisible knife." haha go kim! though im convinced there's another side to her, lol, but maybe not haha

And i love this bit! XD
'“Re match for helm’s deep?” Legolas said to Gimli.
“You’re on, elf boy.” Gimli replied.'

And the ring wraiths actually made me shiver! good descriptions.

I liked the change of pace, cant wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thanks Theja chan!!! I'm glad that you like the story T^T it means so much coming from such a genius like you lolz~

Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 18- Evangeline

Oops... Evangeline is getting on my nerves.
Great job! Write more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!!! XD I really appreciate it. lolz~ Oh and yeahhh I know Evangeline gets on my nerves too when I write about her, but there's more to her than meets the eye...maybe lolz~

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 18- Evangeline

Oo! So much action! And it all was well-drawn out - Robyn's succumbing to the Ring, her pain at attacking the Wraith... I could clearly feel it all.

My heart was beating at the thought of this second break-in. Wrong is right! The things you must do to save the world...

Kim's ultimate weapon against the Wraiths was brilliant! (As was her line - “Take that, you Dementor-looking, dark-dressing, deathly-looking dead person!")

Foaming Wraiths - wow, that's quite an image! :D

Ugh, Evangeline. Is that girl even human?

At least they got what they came for. Now I hope everyone will be alright!

Reviewer: Tinker Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut?

oh my gosh scott is so cool! and sweet and smart too...
haha

'“Never mind that!” I replied. “I’m responsible for the fellowship…so…just shoo.”'
shoo Evangeline! lol, though her situation is starting to get interesting...
'Evangeline snapped and then suddenly stopped, choking on her words.'

maybe she's not so bad after all....

The story's getting more and more suspensful! another great chapter!!

xoxox
good luck on the rest of your exams =D

Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut?

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! MUMMIES!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE MUMMIES!!!(Quoting a movie there!)
More.

Reviewer: Maris Patri Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 - 09:22 am Title: Chapter 11- Epiphany

cool idea with the ring

Reviewer: Maris Patri Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 2- They're REAL?!!!

hey this is funny. But why does everybody wants to touch Legolas ears?

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/11/09 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut?

That was some story Robyn told about the song-writer's great-great granddaughter. :) Aw, Scott's pretty wise! He's no Legolas, but he's not bad.

That would be inconvernient if Kim had to resort to murder. I'm so glad that Robyn's Tolkien after all! But having to be third-cousin with Evangeline... ugh.

I liked Frodo's warning about the Ring. He is the expert. :D

I'm dying to know how they'll solve this King Tut riddle!

Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?!

Uh-oh...... MORE!!

Reviewer: Tinker Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?!

huh, that was unexpected (in a good way ^^)
the fellowship were so cool for protecting Robyn =D
its good they're staying with robin, even if she might not be the great great great grand daughter of Tolkien (for all the crazy stuff they've been through)

And Evangeline... “She’s obviously a monster in disguise…She’s definitely obnoxious like a monster, yes?” haha laughing at that. go kim!

And i like the part with scott ~ lol

xoxox

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?!

Wow – could Robyn really not be the real great-great-granddaughter!? That’s quite a boast. I have to agree with Gimli. I don’t trust Evangeline…

Kim WAS cool. No wonder Legolas is falling for her… :D

“Merry was eating his food heartily…too heartily.” – ooo! That’s gotta send up all kinds of red flags. ^^

I don’t think you can be too precautious when dealing with the Ring. Really, having it in the house would be so creepy!

Poor Robyn – she can’t mean that – she’s got to be a Tolkien…!

Thanks for another excellent chapter. And good luck on your exams!

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