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Title: Chapter 22- Legolas's Lumberjacks Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed
Lol. sorry, but lumberjacks make absolutely no sense. I like it thought.
Date: Nov 22 2009 08:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 22- Legolas's Lumberjacks Reviewer: Samara Signed
Awwwwww! This is awesome! LOL when her mom was all over Aragorn I was like, Oi! Hands OFF my ranger, woman! LOL!

She's trying to get Legolas and Kim together! That's so cute! Nothing against Legolas, but it would be nice if they got together. Maybe...maybe the main character won't get the elf after all. It'd be a first, ya gotta admit it. Laughs.

It doesn't matter how you manage it. I love love love love looooooooooove this story. Evangeline is rather complicated. Bitchy yet kind in a silent I-don't-really-care sort of way. I think I may actually like her.

"Rise and polish, sunshine."

*squeals and laughs* Too freaking cute.

"You shall shine all right."

Awwwwww! *glomps Aragorn and cuddles him*

I hope your exams are going well! You'll do awesomely. That's....not a word. Haha.


Date: Nov 22 2009 09:07 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 22- Legolas's Lumberjacks Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Um, yeah, if my mom acted like that around Aragorn, I’d be very, very disturbed. At least he got her off Robyn’s back!

Ah, that’s to be expected of Evangeline. Telling Robyn to steal her mother’s car keys AND lie to her… why do I think that won’t stop her mom anyway?

Teehee!!! Archery with Legolas… He’s a good teacher. Even I understood what he was saying. :D

Geeze, it is obvious he cares for Kim. It’s strange he mistrusts his feelings so much. Oh my, lumberjacks! He really is serious. I’m glad that Robyn’s so strong she can force this confession out of him… but will he be able to confess it to Kim???
Date: Nov 22 2009 07:07 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 21- Water conservation hoses Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Man, this is as great an opportunity the Ring ever had… scary! And that eye – wonderfully frightening description!

Actually, the whole thing was terrifying and well done. And full of lots of creative ways to fight a Ring-Wraith! (You could make a book about that.)

“Ah…Stupid water conservation hoses!” ^^

Yay! Another clue! And now Robyn’s mom has joined their Fellowship… which must still be better than being grounded for a month. :D
Date: Nov 21 2009 09:11 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 21- Water conservation hoses Reviewer: Mari Signed
crazy idea. have Robyn tell her momshe is an adult and that she does not need to be so controlling!!!
Great chapter!
Date: Nov 21 2009 12:26 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?! Reviewer: Lilmissy Signed
hmmmm....I don't like this Evangeline girl...
Date: Nov 20 2009 10:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15- The Elven Prince Reviewer: Lilmissy Signed
Ah! A cliffhanger O_O

That was such a sweet moment between Leggy and Kim :)

Good job
Date: Nov 20 2009 10:16 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1- The beginning Reviewer: Samara Signed
Oh exams are blergh! I'm out of high school luckily so I forget that now's exam/midterm time. Blech.

You are being so true to his works. It's amazing. Especially with that twist about the ring. It's just great. And I gotta say it again, I love how you're portraying my favorite character, my ranger. So often it just doesn't seem right. But with you, you do a perfect job. You're great. *hugs!*

Good luck on your exams! You'll kick testy ass!
Date: Nov 18 2009 08:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 20- Grounded Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed
i would have said go to hell I'm 18 and slammed the door on their faces. Then tell Gilmi that I did that as revenege for his nose.
Date: Nov 18 2009 06:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 20- Grounded Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Aw! “Rise and polish.” :D
Excellent observation about Frodo. He really must have more willpower than the movie lets on… you must experience it to believe it.
That’s sad! What’s going on between Legolas and Kim. She totally does deserve him.
Hehe! I’m glad Pippin’s hotdogs weren’t horrible! “I bet my gaffer would love these.” Sam said. – So funny…
Ohmigosh! Evengaline actually fixed the axe! It’s not just amazing because it’s *her* but also because that can’t be a common skill. :)
THEY HID IN THE SAME PLACES??? Goodness, there’s no words for this… wow. That’s hilarious.
AND ROBYN’S GROUNDED? Of all things to happen…!
I hope the music exam goes well. ^^
Date: Nov 18 2009 04:47 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go... Reviewer: Samara Signed
Oh. My.. God. This story is absolutely, without a doubt one of the most spectacular works I have EVER read. You, my dear, are an absolute genius. A gem among authors. A true writer. A true Tolkien. The emotion, the friendships, the humor, the everything makes this story such a pleasure to read. Please update soon. I'll be waiting eagerly. You're incredible. I love this. Love it. I never want it to end.

I love how you portray Aragorn. Robyn can has hug from the ranger? *smiles and laughs* I like Leggy, but Aragorn's my favorite. I love him in any role he's put into and your role of big brother/best friend/kinda father/uncle/everything loving and true just makes me smile and want to curl up with him and have him protect me. And that cheesiness could be because you write Robyn so well, you completely allow me to immerse myself in her personality. I become her when I read, feeling her feelings, crying her tears, smiling her smiles, fighting her fears. (Hey, that rhymed.) This story is a gift and I hope you never stop writing it. Riddles, portals and're outstanding and you'll always have a fan and reader in me.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind comment T^T It means a lot to me. I really do want to be dedicated to Tolkien's works coz he's amazing!!! XD I'll try my best to update soon...sadly exams are keeping me from it T^T gahhh high school exams are so troublesome lolz~ I only have 3 more to go so I should be on my way to writing very soon XD
Date: Nov 17 2009 11:47 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go... Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
“She would’ve been cool…if she wasn’t so arrogant.” – My thoughts exactly. I mean, c’mon, ‘small dwarf guy’? The dwarf’s in mourning now!

Squee!!! The Fellowship is cute! So it wasn’t an irrational love – there’s a lot tied to that axe.

I liked Robyn’s thoughts over the Fellowship. It will be sad if the time comes that they have to say goodbye… :'(

Not a depressing chapter at all. Good luck on the exams!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the reviews! XD I was so scared to put up my writing coz I thought that people might not like it T^T so thank you for all the kind comments. I really appreciate it! Oh and I read your Ottysey O_O you're really good at writing!!! I'll try my best on the exams XD hehe I should really be studying but I keep procrastinating and keep on writing my fanfic instead =3=" (not good...grrr...)
Date: Nov 17 2009 10:56 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go... Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed
OH!! the poor thing!!
Date: Nov 17 2009 07:48 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18- Evangeline Reviewer: Tinker Signed
WOW! intense chapter

"Kim scrunched up her nose and pretended to stab Evangeline with an invisible knife." haha go kim! though im convinced there's another side to her, lol, but maybe not haha

And i love this bit! XD
'“Re match for helm’s deep?” Legolas said to Gimli.
“You’re on, elf boy.” Gimli replied.'

And the ring wraiths actually made me shiver! good descriptions.

I liked the change of pace, cant wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thanks Theja chan!!! I'm glad that you like the story T^T it means so much coming from such a genius like you lolz~
Date: Nov 17 2009 02:18 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18- Evangeline Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed
Oops... Evangeline is getting on my nerves.
Great job! Write more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!!! XD I really appreciate it. lolz~ Oh and yeahhh I know Evangeline gets on my nerves too when I write about her, but there's more to her than meets the eye...maybe lolz~
Date: Nov 16 2009 04:16 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18- Evangeline Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Oo! So much action! And it all was well-drawn out - Robyn's succumbing to the Ring, her pain at attacking the Wraith... I could clearly feel it all.

My heart was beating at the thought of this second break-in. Wrong is right! The things you must do to save the world...

Kim's ultimate weapon against the Wraiths was brilliant! (As was her line - “Take that, you Dementor-looking, dark-dressing, deathly-looking dead person!")

Foaming Wraiths - wow, that's quite an image! :D

Ugh, Evangeline. Is that girl even human?

At least they got what they came for. Now I hope everyone will be alright!
Date: Nov 16 2009 07:52 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut? Reviewer: Tinker Signed
oh my gosh scott is so cool! and sweet and smart too...

'“Never mind that!” I replied. “I’m responsible for the fellowship…so…just shoo.”'
shoo Evangeline! lol, though her situation is starting to get interesting...
'Evangeline snapped and then suddenly stopped, choking on her words.'

maybe she's not so bad after all....

The story's getting more and more suspensful! another great chapter!!

good luck on the rest of your exams =D
Date: Nov 15 2009 01:31 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut? Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! MUMMIES!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE MUMMIES!!!(Quoting a movie there!)
Date: Nov 14 2009 03:15 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11- Epiphany Reviewer: Maris Patri Signed
cool idea with the ring
Date: Nov 14 2009 03:22 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2- They're REAL?!!! Reviewer: Maris Patri Signed
hey this is funny. But why does everybody wants to touch Legolas ears?
Date: Nov 14 2009 02:21 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut? Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
That was some story Robyn told about the song-writer's great-great granddaughter. :) Aw, Scott's pretty wise! He's no Legolas, but he's not bad.

That would be inconvernient if Kim had to resort to murder. I'm so glad that Robyn's Tolkien after all! But having to be third-cousin with Evangeline... ugh.

I liked Frodo's warning about the Ring. He is the expert. :D

I'm dying to know how they'll solve this King Tut riddle!
Date: Nov 13 2009 04:42 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?! Reviewer: Mia Oria Signed
Uh-oh...... MORE!!
Date: Nov 08 2009 11:22 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?! Reviewer: Tinker Signed
huh, that was unexpected (in a good way ^^)
the fellowship were so cool for protecting Robyn =D
its good they're staying with robin, even if she might not be the great great great grand daughter of Tolkien (for all the crazy stuff they've been through)

And Evangeline... “She’s obviously a monster in disguise…She’s definitely obnoxious like a monster, yes?” haha laughing at that. go kim!

And i like the part with scott ~ lol

Date: Nov 07 2009 11:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?! Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Wow – could Robyn really not be the real great-great-granddaughter!? That’s quite a boast. I have to agree with Gimli. I don’t trust Evangeline…

Kim WAS cool. No wonder Legolas is falling for her… :D

“Merry was eating his food heartily…too heartily.” – ooo! That’s gotta send up all kinds of red flags. ^^

I don’t think you can be too precautious when dealing with the Ring. Really, having it in the house would be so creepy!

Poor Robyn – she can’t mean that – she’s got to be a Tolkien…!

Thanks for another excellent chapter. And good luck on your exams!
Date: Nov 07 2009 07:07 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15- The Elven Prince Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Wow! Did Legolas *really* crack a fat-joke…? that will haunt me the rest of my life. :)

The talk between Robyn and Legolas was beautiful. So they do have something in common! High expectations from their fathers. I like how JRR stepped into Legolas’ life – what he said really sounds like what he WOULD say. (Just from reading his books, anyway. :))

And Legolas was done very well too. His outloud contemplation of Kim was cute and again very much himself. You’ve got his Elvish part-serious-part-frolicking thing down pat.

Cripes! Another cliffhanger… (YAY!) ^^
Date: Nov 05 2009 11:49 am [Report This]
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