Wow! Did Legolas *really* crack a fat-joke…? that will haunt me the rest of my life. :)
The talk between Robyn and Legolas was beautiful. So they do have something in common! High expectations from their fathers. I like how JRR stepped into Legolas’ life – what he said really sounds like what he WOULD say. (Just from reading his books, anyway. :))
And Legolas was done very well too. His outloud contemplation of Kim was cute and again very much himself. You’ve got his Elvish part-serious-part-frolicking thing down pat.
Cripes! Another cliffhanger… (YAY!) ^^
just had a huge dose of your fanfic.. it felt like i was reading an actual novel =D.
i love the way you dont forget any of the characters.. i didnt realise pippin could be so deep! very sad about the unrequited love...
i hope scott's gonna be okay, hope robyn won't be too mean and lead him on or anything... lol im always rooting for the second guy.
really want to read the next chapter! left it in suspense...
btw - thanx so much kun
OOH! A very emotion-soaked chapter! Wonderful - Elves really are ticklish.
I liked the 'accidental kiss...' :)
It seems poor Scott is caught in the middle... first Robyn's parents use him and now she want to use him to forget Legolas...
AH! Quite a cliffhanger – Robyn’s not hurt, I hope! I'm eager for more. :D
OH! She's in journalism too. I just got out of that class a few hours ago. :D
Nice summarizations, especially of Legolas and Kim's growing relationship.
Aha - the Uruk are hiding out! But it sure won't be fun to go track down a gang of prune-faces in an abandonded prison... ugh, that really is scary (you could get nice interviews for a story from them, though).
Sam's story about his Gaffer was touching! I'm glad Robyn made the decision to go home. I can't wait to see how that goes. :)
Oh dear, I wouldn’t want to be in the car with Robyn, ever… ;) And those evil GPSs…
“I parked at the park’s parking space.” – that is fun to say.
Hmm, interesting thought: would Robyn have taken the Ring if she had known?
Wow, Kim’s amazing! College professors! Of course! (The scary thing is, that would not be too farfetched. :P)
OH MY GOSH!
That’s why the Fellowship has been so reticent… that’s why Kim’s been so crazy…
(Like Robyn didn’t have enough problems!)
This was an awesome epiphany. I’m very anxious to see what happens now. :)
Things are never easy – breaking into a farm now! I like Kim’s can-do attitude. I’m very worried about Gandalf too! That’s such a bittersweet sadness that Robyn seems to have found a family in the Fellowship that her parents are not to her.
“Road stumble” – another adorable Aragorn moment. Ah, Legolas is so smart; where could those wells be? And WHAT is wrong with Kim???
Wow – an amazing array of backup plans! I had extreme butterflies in my stomach for Robyn. And a bit of Kim’s jealousy… :P
Legolas asking for coffee – precious!
They got the file! Yes! I like Kim’s note. :)
You’re doing a great job at balancing the humor and drama! If there was too much or less of either it would be less dimensional.
Cereal for Pippin!!! Could he be any cuter? :) Even his manic desire to meet Robyn’s parents was adorable, although it almost gave me a heartattack. With or without her parents seeing the Fellowship, that sure wasn’t a pretty scene!
Legolas hiding in the curtains??? *choke-laughs*
I can’t wait for the break-in!
They liked the sushi! Wonderful!
I am reading this in a cafeteria so around all these eating people the burp contest just made me crack up.
Ah, they really, really are going to break in… oh dear.
Aragorn’s misspeech was adorable!
Hoo boy, Robyn does have family problems… what could her parents be doing? Trying to make each other jealous? Hmm… it makes me glad she has a friend such as Kim to go to.
Her talk with Pippin was sweet. She’s much stronger than she thinks. :)
Very sad about the fish. :( I do cry my heart out every time one of my numerous cats disappear.
Hah, Middle-earth men are *scarily* straight forward. But then, it’s nice in a way; no secrets and second-guessing… For some reason I never thought that Merry was in love with Eowyn, but it makes sense. I love how simple and true that sounded coming from Merry: “Sometimes, loving someone means letting them go… He made me realize that it would have been a waste if I lost love and lost friendship as well.”
"She had an ordinary appearance but she was charming which was better than being pretty." that's very true.
Gimli is so funny. It's really good how you pace the story. It's not overwhelming and it keeps me interested with all the inserted humor.
Good job! Favorited.