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Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 - 01:45 pm Title: SWHS TEACHERS: The Good And the Bad

An excellent beginning. I like the way you have developed Mira's character and surroundings before introducing the first LotR character. I look forward to Chapter 2.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm sure you'll enjoy chapter two. Let's just say her first moments with our elven prince are very awkward.

Reviewer: Mari Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 - 10:44 pm Title: SWHS TEACHERS: The Good And the Bad

Dun, dun, dun...
Very good. What's gonna happen?
I laugh at Mick.

Author's Response: You always laugh at mick.

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