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Reviewer: Traveller Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant! And so beautiful! I love how your descriptions of a single moment last for paragraphs. I loved the parts from the pov of the people in Gondor- an outsider's view is a refreshing take on the tale. Although I *think* the Hobbits were taken to Ithilien rather than Minas Tirith to heal, the slight AU makes for a fresh, new perspective. The very last paragraph was my favorite. Yay for Hobbity-angsty-goodness!

-Traveller

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