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Reviewer: Elleth4454 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/03/12 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. You should say phisical age of three though, as elves age differently. But all in all, it was funny and it made me laugh.

Reviewer: Jinny Moor Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/11 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww cute!! xx

Reviewer: Farawein Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/11 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1

i like the idea of the story, you should write about Legolas growing up, that would bring in the readers, and if you write other chapters as well as this, you'll be golden

Reviewer: Lisse Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/02/10 - 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for your response to my challenge. Any 3 year old is a handful. And I can imagine your puffy cheeked little blond elfling to be double trouble! What a patient Ada, and happy childhood you made for Legolas. No wonder he grew to be so strong and beautiful!

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