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Reviewer: belegcuthalion Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 - 09:08 pm Title: Prologue

Love how Gandalf's *cough* master plan for Estel to appreciate Legolas is backfiring by him saying that it's all his fault. What happened to the totally all-powerful elf ring of air that Elrond had? If he turned into a little kid the thing protecting Rivendell probably fell off by now...Gandalf really has to think these things through

Reviewer: belegcuthalion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/10 - 07:40 pm Title: Part 1: Anthrophobia (2/3)

This is really interesting, especially with Estel not being an adorable little angel (it's adorable and I love it but it can be a bit overdone) This seems really creative but I find that everyone else's to Elrond's transformation a little too...I don't know under-dramatic...I mean if your dad just turned into a little kid and run away you freak out, not turn around and ask calmly when he will return to normal or start yelling at your little brother, well maybe that's just a shock period. Gandalf has cruel ways of teaching people lessons...very cruel

Author's Response: Yep... Gandalf is the evil one... grin... Though i thought to write some payback to Elrond due another story that i'm writing. Thank you for your review. *Hugs & Kisses* Have a great day/night and keep smiling, Sivan Shemesh

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