Nice story, and well written. It is so hard not to feel for Legolas - "The Valar seem to have a malicious sense of humor." That line appears to sum it up. I wouldn't mind to see more of this, but that is your own decision. It is still quite a good oneshot.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! i'm glad i was able to evoke some emotion; that's what i was trying to do! and thanks for the input. i'll see if any plot bunnies show up. :)