Great work. Beautifully done. Don't sell yourself short. You've got something here.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for your kind remarks. I've been reading fan fic for about 6 months and trying to write for about 4-5 months. It's a lot of fun, and after all only a hobby. My goal is to make people lol only when something is *suppose* to be funny.
*speechless* Oh, sweet...you are a NATURAL! More, please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much B_cat. One can hardly be called a natural if it takes months to post less than 200 words. Your support and friendship mean the world!
It is a pleasure to read such wonderful and inspiring verse. I found this beautiful the first time I read it and again I continue to find it extraordinary writing. You have a gift. I hope you will continue to embrace it.
Author's Response: If there is any gift, it was awakened by a good friend without whom I would never have attempted to write anything. Friends like this are more valuable than anything Eru might bestow, and the only reason to hope for eternity. However if Eru would like to bestow my own personal Elf Lord, that may be a reason to want to stick around eternally also.
This is so beautifully written, it’s incredible. I love the ideas and how they were presented, and the words and how there placed…SO AWESOME.
I aspire to one day write like this. Splendid work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It is the best I can offer. I'm very new at this. May I recommend you look into Los Gloriol's writings. Then you will see admirable work.
mmm this is lovely! my favorite line is: "Eru wastes not his workmanship, nor allows his children to." everyone who has ever doubted his purpose in life should read this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind review. I do believe the good we do is eternal somehow, and that there is a lasting purpose behind this mess called life! Thanks again.