I love this story and it's various sub plots.
I am eager to see how it will all be orchestrated into the final crescendo at the end.
Thank you both for this interesting tale.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it Scarlet! Yes, there are many plots running about right now, and I am just as excited as you to see the finally result, it should be fun :D Thank-you for reviewing -Encairion
wonderful story so far ihope you two will post more soon... i wonder what will happen with gildor and lindir...tis woman thinks they two are the parents of the elven child so maybe her words will show lindir that gildo loves him...please post more soon
Author's Response: Thank-you for the review Danira :D Yes, the human's did think Lindir and Gildor were the parents -the mother and father *cheeky grin* Well, the next two chapters are up so your wish is granted, hope you enjoy :D -Encairion
I love this story. I love Lindir. Please write more ^^
Author's Response: Thank-you for the review Yana :D
We're glad you are enjoying it so far, it has been a real pleasure to write :D Do not worry the story is far from over!
Encairion and Liadan
I just want to say how much I am enjoying this, especially the UST between Gildor and Lindir, and their travels, which you are both writing beautifully. I can *see* their travels, which I love.
Author's Response: Thank-you for the review Siān :D
WE are so pleased you are enjoying their travels, they have much more to come ;) And its good to hear Gildor/Lindir have lots of chemical tension working for them! We hope you continue to enjoy :D
Everything about him was a mask for a soul devouring itself from self-hate and regret. But the mask had fallen for that one brief moment, and I had seen into the soul of a husband still grieving from the loss of his beloved five hundred years ago. The wound was as fresh as if she had died yesterday, and it would be ever fresh, reopening itself every day until Gildor’s death if he could not find a way to forgive himself for not being able to save his wife from the Valar’s wrath.
That is very intriguing, I like how Gildor does not turn out to be exactly as he seems. :)
Author's Response: Thank-you Siąn :D I am happy you liked Gildor, I am pleased he isn't two-dimensional and ended up having some depth!
I am glad you're enjoying the story :D
I am very glad you are posting this on here.
Role-play can be very good fun and also a challenge, if you don't know what the other writer is going to come up with.
Wonderful start ! I very much look forward to this story, Liadan and Encairion. :)
Author's Response: Thank-you Sian! Pink was wonderful enough to approve a public posting :D I am glad you like it so far, role playing has indeed ended up to be loads of fun! Thank-you for the review! Encairion