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Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Gandalfsflaminghat Signed
haha really funny
Date: Oct 16 2011 01:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
Sorry I've taken so long to read your final chapter. By all means, write a sequel. You can't leave Peter Jackson stranded in Middle Earth or Arwen left in our world.

As for similar stories of my own, you might want to check out Elven Ears and Lothlórien Autumn.
Date: Dec 31 2010 09:05 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
Good action scenes and now much better with proper line breaks. You might also mention Pippin's surprise that his counterpart is Mannish.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'll put that in.
Date: Jun 21 2010 09:04 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
You're off to a fine start here, Ethee. You might add line breaks between quotes and paragraphs, however. It makes for easier reading for older folks like me who have to rely on bifocals.
Date: Jun 20 2010 09:52 pm [Report This]
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